I have also read the novel you have taken inspiration from and I must say the quality of your novel matches my expectations.Really good.Awesome novel.Keep it up!Also do try to not go down the path of that novel where plot development was basically almost gone towards the end.Though fluff always keeps you hooked I guess ?
Writing Quality:it was great and understandable. There are some paragraphs that needs proofreading. And the dialogues needs improvement. Nonetheless, it doesn't affect the novel as a whole.Story Development:I like how the story is progressing. It gives off a mystery and cliffhanger vibes. Makes you wanna read it more. Interesting, if I conclude it.Character Design:The characters in this novel are very unique and makes you have certain emotions when reading. Even the side characters have a fun traits.Updating Stability:Consistent. The author always goes to his promise; every x powerstone = x chapters. And he updates it every day. So, you can certainly quench your thirst if you got cliffhanged.World Background:For me the world background seems quite small and after seeing the concept art of the world I'm certain it is. It would've been nice if the world is 20x the size of the sun or has multiple worlds aside the current world the MC is in.
this book was rather unique when it comes to character design and world building I was rather surprised to see that the main character isn't looking at the present.
As of chapter 14, it is decent. Since there is not that many chapters yet it is hard to give a proper review but it certainly has potential.
Totally recommend this story. The author is going for a light novel vibe, with the epic fight of Hero vs. Demon King, with complications. In this setting, the Demon King is in the final stages of winning. The MC hero is just one of many sent over to stop him, but the others usually give up.Anyone who likes isekai stories should read this. This is better written than most of the other isekai stories out there.
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Seems like a magic version of "The Legendary Mechanic" except theres no background to the MC, just wakes up in the game. MC barely gets his first quest 10 chapters in and completes it mostly solo, agaisnt an npc twice his level who takes more than 24 hours to heal and regain mana. Also takes the MC several weeks to get to level 10. Just under 3 months. the majority of game the 1st 10-20 levels can be gotten anywhere from 5 to 6 hrs to 1 week. just not getting drawn into the story.
Overall, this novel is pretty great, I can't say the Grammer or English is the best, since there is things such as "Self made
Bruh .I forced myself to keep reading based on 'MC will get better ' and ' story will get better . How much more torture do i have to endure, how many more braincells do i have to sacrifice before this actually gets better???!!!
I found this novel by chance when looking for something new to read. And all I can say is that I love it so far. It's very interesting and can't wait for more chapters to come along. Keep up the great work!
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It would be nice if I could search in a search bar for what I want to read. Do this and I'll give the whole app and book a 5 star rating.???????????????????