in all honesty I expected more from this novel. author is decently skilled in writing so reading chapter after chapter is a pleasure but. And here comes problems, MC is a kid, so he is inexperienced, lacking a skill to handle both fighting situations and daily decisions, which won't be a problem if not for a slow progress. he is overly reliant on his Arcana, which is a source of power unique for every awakened person and since the stronger Arcana the more intelligent it is, he is just played by it like a full and beeing manipulated. that's a main reason why I dropped this novel, this and idea of time travel which honestly was introduced too early into a story and created a massive mess. So basically is hard to enjoy reading about this puppet like MC. For a plus, side character are nicely written and they ve got a decent amount of time, but they just can't carry thus story alone.
Dropped at chapter 70. Writing quality becomes horrendous after chapter 40. Gender pronouns constantly messed up. Names translated several different ways so you never know who is talking. Sentences occasionally being complete nonsense. Paragraphs will occasionally miss punctuation entirely. So you dont know if someone is talking or thinking. It's just confusing and hard to read. Not to mention zero information is given on world back ground. That includes the game world. then there is the newbie characters able to get equipment/mechs that one shot God like beings. I really tried but it is very hard to enjoy in its current state. Needs an editor desperately. Then maybe a chapter or two added to the beginning dedicated to building the real world and game world. Maybe the MC history.
I would love if the author will continue to release more chapters in this book because so far the storyline has been great and I will love to see how far it goes
The author has managed to make the LitRPG trope new and interesting. The world seems to be a version of Earth where Explorers and the Maze influenced how the planet would advance.
Hera, the main character, has her faults. She lets others walk all over her, and seems to have no self confidence. But what she does have is determination.
A lucky break and a unique beginning skill allows her to fulfill her lifelong dream of becoming a Maze explorer.
What I most enjoy about the story is the time the Author invested in training and the quest to gain a class. I think these details that show us the how of this world are what keep me coming back.
I can't wait to see how Hera begins to learn magic. I hope as an Explorer that means she can create her own spells, and not be confined to something the System offers.
There are a few editing and grammar problems, but 99.99 percent of the book reads smoothly.
Hey WebNovel, how about finishing all the existing stories you picked up earlier, before you start translating new novels. In the last year you dropped like 5 or 6 popular novels which were completed for 50-70%Seriously, whats the point for me to buy premium for this novel or other, if in the end you are going to drop it midway? I'd much more prefer if I can get 6 chapters daily from one novel, instead of 2 chapters from 3 novels. I'd even pay some money since its that what you are after, but like don't even think about getting a dolla from me before you pick up the novels you dropped and finished the existing translations. But if you still try to take new novels, at least pick up something good. Or else you will loose majority of your readers. You will not get any profit like this, c'mon, WebNovel dawg, you can get 1 dollar from 100000 average readers or 10 dollars from 100 rich readers, its obvious which is more profitable. You get my idea, right?Guys please like this comment so that webnovel will hopefully see it and finish the existing translations ASAP before switching to new books.
I started reading this novel despite the terrible grammar, but I could not read more than two chapters, because MC is incredibly stupid, seriously, even children have more logic and reason than this idiot, I do not recommend starting reading this novel for those who have at least minimal standards of "adequacy" of the protagonist.
This novel has me hooked the story, characters, and world building sucked me in and I want more. On the other hand grammar is pretty bad I would recommend to use grammerly it's free and will automatically fix basic grammar problems. I cheat and use it on my English papers lol. Keep up the good work cant wait too see what happens next!!!
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I started reading a book already from this writer and it was great. And this book too, I didn't expect any less from the writer. Adding this to my reading list, great Job!
I have made the writing as easy to understand and error-free as possible, but if there are any errors, you can let me know and I will fix it.I will publish at least 3 chapters every week. I can publish more if I have more free time from work. I am a student + worker but I will do the best I can :)The story development will be fast in the first volume since it is more focused on building the plot for the future story. But there will be steady development focusing on the world and the characters from the second volume. I know some people like a long descriptive start... But really, I think it would be too boring if the story without making much progress at the start.The harem: Yes, the pieces are coming together.The character background: No, even in a fantasy world everyone doesn't have a dark past, and 'I will create a revolution and change the country' like goal... Some may have such background though :PIsekai: You may find it like every other isekai if you only read the first few chapters... There are twists in the later chapters.I am a The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy fan so some reference may be used from there. (eg. the world is a program).... :D But there aren't many sci-fi elements here and No gaming elements.I hope you enjoy the book. Even if you don't, thanks for giving it a try... You guys are awesome :)So long and thanks for all the fish!!!