While I do agree with the many comments complaining obsessively about how it's a copy/paste plot, there are still a few good redeeming qualities in this novel.The translation could use some help. There was one line where apparently Enoch was killed. Also, some of the consistency in naming & spelling would be nice (i.e. "Love Farm" > "Heart Farm" or "Heart Manor". "Divine Tree" > "Sacred Tree". Pretty sure Glenn had at least 3-4 different names & spellings)Sometimes it gets difficult to tell if Enoch is controlling the rat or is actually there. It feels like the author went back and forth between these two thoughts on many occasions.1. This is the first time that I've seen a novel involving an idea similar to the Divine Tree. The plant theme is definitely unique despite parts being obviously taken from Plants vs. Zombies.2. Alice's character is a unique take on the "future-seeing/information-dealer" type character.3. This is the first time I have seen "random" talents based off of a choice & lack of which choice gives which talent.4. *Perhaps the most interesting: I love the idea of the Dark Fog, the exploration, and the difficulty being based on the exploration.tl;dr > It is a copy/paste plot that has a few unique takes/ideas that made it enjoyable for me to read.
This novel has one of the most op mc i have ever seen, the buff are also pretty creative ,other characters are basically what you can see in any op mc novel , the world design is ok to be honest Overall good novel to binge if you are bored
Not really sure with the other reviews but I think this one has potential to say the least, although the MC will probs make an enemy with countries that's not China I'm already used to it. I'm more interested in the Cultivation Side of things anyways and maybe some of the sights from earth where MC will get OP stuff from legendary Figures from the past, but all in all I've enjoyed it so far and can't wait for more especially the Romance scenes~ Ah~ I'm already giggling like a maniac just thinking about the future.
You know the story is a good one when you read the prologue, know it isn't fantasy so you need to close the novel just to see the tags and pray that the tragedy tag is not there because you were already shipping the characters for their happy ending. At least this is what happened to me. (sadly, the tragedy tag is in this story)I think my rating says it all. From the prologue I was captivated, and each chapter is developed and described so perfectly that there it leaves the reviewer with just one word: AWESOME! Keep writing! I hope to read more about Marcus and Ayesha in the future (even if the prologue broke my heart into tiny pieces)
Overall it's a great start but MCs emotional development is not upto the standard.
I hope this story has harem content.
Try not to drop the story,because it has a nice plot.
MC acts and talks like a young master villain who is planning to rob 10$ from a billionaire protagonist. It isn't funny, its cringe. If they could only transmigrate someone smart.
I love the flow and development of this book. the characters are so entertaining and keeps me wanting to read more. the book is edgy and thrilling!
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Here’s just something that should be noted before you readers start my novel.1. The Mc will be OP, but there will be a balance. And, of course, he would have some rationality to think cuz he ain’t an idiot.2. There will be a little harem, fortunately or unfortunately, for some of you. And yes, that means there will be romance.3. MC is the playful type that almost doesn’t care about what happens, but he’s always thinking seriously inside.4. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.MY ENTRY TO WPC 320If you like the story so far, please consider lendingufffc me your power stones and maybe a review. :3I will try my best for regular updates if my novel wins.
Would say world development is bad but she is a shut in ? love the story so far want more stats though and just more chapters ?( needed more characters)
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Hello, readers! Author here.
Please take the time to review my work if you haven't had the chance to. It isn't easy to produce content from such a sophisticated world that flows naturally. Obviously, it is compounded by the fact I am in my final year of university. Any tips/comments/suggestions to improve and I would be grateful.
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