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It's alright. Slow to start. After it does start, it isn't very interesting. So, not bad, but not something I'll bother reading further.
I really really want to like this novel. It is well written and the characters aren't too bland even though they don't matter at all in the next arc.But there are some key problems that make it impossible:1. The second short story (simulated life) within this novel is a festival of cliques and not interesting at all.2. Face slapping is a sport and while the MC doesn't always take the first opportunity to do it, it will always happen in the end.3. There is no red line, no overarching goal for the MC to achieve.4. The system by itself is reducing any stakes to almost nothing. I don't mean for the author to add something stupid like, immediate death or destruction of the soul, but there could at least be monetary losses or some kind of debuffs. 5. The author drags on and on about unimportant stuff, skipping chapters is sometimes the only way to still gain a modicum of enjoyment.
I like the fact that the grades and cultivation levels are all conveniently listed at the start, that way, no one would get lost and even if they did, they could just go back to the first chapter. This is one basic thing that many cultivation writers tend to miss. Also, the story is great, of course it couldn't rival Super Gene or Vampire System but it's good all on its own. Great job author! Don't drop it, this is bound to come far :)
A masterpiece. It is a very good novel, with the protagonist having quite a unique character development, it is a great experience to read this novel. Marvelous.
I love it,the worldbuilding and character development is pretty great.Hope you won't drop this story,as I'm invested into reading it
Phenomenal story with excellent characters placed in a fun world. If I had to pick an issue, and I'm reaching here, it would be that the story inconsistently decides what genre it is. Sometimes it is a slice-of-life story, other times it is high fantasy, and occasionally wants to be a young adult novel. Despite this truthfully small issue, the story is one I'd recommend to any and all.
It's like Solo Leveling but Chinese and bad.Our protagonist is extremely overpowered, it's seriously over the top and his whole gimmick is having a system that gives him a bunch of perks in addition to his already broken brutish necromancer class but like any good CN hack writer, our author balances our epic Gary Stu protagonist by giving him an injured older sister (who isn't blood related because CN novel) as a weak point for enemies to exploit.Like seriously, the whole plot is rubbish and painful to read, it feels so forced, this reminds me of those old school cultivation novels with insufferable copy paste son of destiny protagonists, it's honestly pathetic.And of course, it goes without saying that the worldbuilding, characters, and powersystems in this novel are completely unoriginal and uninteresting in both concept and execution. The characters are especially just really badly written, the antagonists especially are so badly written I feel physical pain whenever they show up.The more I think about this novel, the less I care for it (I think most people would share this sentiment), I'm just impressed with my ability to get through all 20 chapters of this stupid trainwreck. Anything this novel had going for it initially (which isn't much in the first place) has been completely ruined by the abysmal story and characters. Even if the story and other aspects were bearable, this novel's almost comical lack of originality would ruin it anyway. This is not good. 0.25/5
okay ummm this is my second time of reviewing this novel and all I can say is "Don't read it" This novel has exhausted all my coins ?If you read it, you're bound to fall into the author's genjutsu. (it's a really really high level genjutsu and I'm a victim of it ?)So I'd advise you to stay away from it. Please don't be a victim! ?
the only reason I have not rated this novel a full five is because of the stability of updates please give us more chappppppppteerrrrrrrrrrrsssssssss I love your story
Author's shameless review here.1) This is a novel where magic exist so don't try to force your common sense here, that being said if there are situation that you don't understand, don't worry everything will be explained when time comes.
DO NOT BE TRICKED BY THE SYNOPSISWhile the synopsis is partially true, the tone of it is actually incorrect.You'll understand the severity of the protagonists situation as a SPY in a FOREIGN NATION (no racism or anything in this novel here) where his colleagues could be killed off right in front of him with him only being able to watch.READ THIS NOVEL!It gets REALLLLY fucking good at 40+ chapter, I'm at 43 and I've already started writing a review because I WANT this novel to win.Please read it.It's a real gem.
