Wow! It is a very refreshing story so far! At first I was thinking it was going to be like those stay at home survival against the disasters type, but as I continued, it was different from most of the others I've read so far! I look forward to the rest and wish you luck on this journey of creation.
I love it, the plot is so classic and well established ❤️u200d?❤️u200d?❤️u200d?❤️u200d? keep at it, zik is a well balance main characters. Can't wait for the next chapter
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
All I can say is this was a great read and I’m wondering why it hasn’t been published in paperback yet. Stands toe to toe to the over a dozen light novel series I own.
Good Job author keep it up ,it's Breath of fresh air..
Heya. This is a shameless review by me, the author. Check out this story and I hope you like it. If you like it, then respond with comments or reviews along with ps.
-12 chapters in-Another novel with a main character who should be OP right off the bat but is stifled by various rules and regulations. The mc has 1 unique aspect and thats his “infinite domain”, which sounds cool but just means he can continuously expand his territory, like every other god in every other novel like this. Except, for them, it’s just assumed they can expand there territory and they have another unique trait, here it’s his only unique trait.There is essentially no world building. We know of a forest, city, and a town ridden by plague. We know nothing about the worlds size, structure, or history. what is mentioned is not described at all.The mc is supposed to be the first god on this planet but for an unexplained reason, he’s late 3000+ years and Is significantly far behind the rest of the gods.Theres no character development. The mc has no goals or aspirations. He probably has some but the author doesn’t tell us a lot of things, like the other 60+ gods are all familiar to the mc and how, maybe, many people from earth were transmigrated. The first girl he meets is one dimensional and takes an interest into the mc for no reason. The family that worships mc aren’t described and they have no personality.The pacing of this novel is odd. The mc is setting up his personal followers, going to school with, I assume, only the goal to get stronger, and he’s learning about his place in the world. These three major plot points will be discussed multiple times within one chapter with very little actually being achieved.
way the characters are designed it's magnificent. I am always looking forward for every single update because once I read I feel like I have to read more, I think I need to sue the author for this!!! Because you're starting to make me an addict?, jokes aside I really have nothing to say about this I just hope that the author will have more inspiration so he/she would not stop to write hehehe, but still don't forget to rest. Thank you author!!!
Shameless author review!This is my first time ever writing any kind of book, therefore don't expect it to be perfectThe story is still in its infancy stages, so any kind of advice and or critique would help me a lotI would really appreciate it if you guys gave it a try!
I think I did good on this book how a bout you
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