I've been a fan of this author since I read contract marriage and am sure this will be a blast.
Story is quite interesting Don't miss it
I really liked the beginning. The sequence of events is also good, but your story has many dangers, but I am confident that you will not fall into it. I loved the character of Lowell very much and how he wrote it. Good luck, buddy.
That's such a unique concept you have. The first two paragraphs were sufficient to grab my attention. I'm guessing there is more here beyond the VR gaming. That's the sense I got from the synopsis. Let's hope we have some good real world action as well. Keep up the good work author!
the book has been nice so far, hope for more updates
Thank you for writing an interesting story
The story is good. But I hope you will finish it and update it regularly. Looking forward to it.
"Tha.. That was you?... Lizzy I'm so sorry.. I was drunk I remember. But Lizzy.... God.. I'm so fucking sorry"
it's a interesting story for time pass and u will like it
Never! Never! Never!
Never! Never!
The brain room had red lights flashing, along with a voice screaming 'waRniNg'. The youngins glared at the oldies. The oldies didn't know what to do except stare at the floor in shame.