This is very unique, not like the classic ''in-game skills are appearing in the real world''. I can't say much cause I'm in chap 40 but I'm really enjoying so far
Author, I like your world building and way of writing, but your novels get too dark for me. It made me feel sad throughout Sword God. If you write a light-hearted, I would definitely be interested. I can not read this anymore.I have read until chapter 104
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and...
I remember that I read this years ago though only MTL, its one of the best fanfic out there, now I can read a much proper TL.SPOILER BELOW!!!!Is this the fanfic where Boa Hancock was killed?
If you like The Legendary Mechanic, you probably will enjoy this one. Pity though after chapter 40, it's mtl. Just like TLM, imo this kind of novel is boring when the story is focusing too much with the npc protagonist solo adventure, when actually the best part about this kind of novel is the players.
Just an examination of the writer's style.There's a frequent lack or overuse of punctuation that makes sentences flow awkwardly. The author's sentence structuring and wording, in general, can also create a strange read at times.However, grammatical errors are minimal, and to give credit where credit's due, the Author has an exceptional vocabulary and word sense. This prevents them from overdoing one of my biggest irks with novels on the site, rapidly overusing the same words in a small area of text.An example of what I mean would be, "The other boys were going to attack but the leader stood up gesturing to not attack." This example was ripped straight out of a fairly popular novel.
Raw please...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
interesting concept. The suspense is really good. Wishing the author well wishes for a good writing experience. I highly recommend this book to whoever sees this review.
Relaxing turned to something of an addiction. Waiting for more chapters, patiently. Definitely love the mismatched family environment and the need of the FLUFFY!
It's well written and easy to read and seems to be inspired from TLM which is awesome. I did expect more from MC with his experience but he's not the worst to follow. The story is enjoyable to follow along so far and there are plenty of free chapters to get acquainted with everything. I'm still confused though on how the planet or humans were destroyed among other things but yea, worth reading
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Writing Quality ★★★•Many things are translater or was written wrongly or not aligning to what it should be, some are also connected with each other without spacing ex: Iwillkill your...Story Development ★★★★•It's a solid 4 for me because of its superb story pacing, 2 scenes are kinda forced but it's still good.Character Design★★★★★• The way the author gave life to every character and how he/she can make the audience understand how they feel is already chef kissed. Although in the original world there's still some ladder being climbed for the MC to mature it still show its good potential.Updating stability★★★★★• Might change it later....World Background ★★★★★• Since MC is being put to different world or should I say 'virtual world' it gives the story different vibes and different backgrounds but since it's still on the trial and onky released 20 chapters it has potential. This is one of the great trial novel I've read here on this site couldn't believe they actually put something new or kinda 'new' which is pretty much better than the other "novel" which is basically a copied version of a copied version of the original novel.I'll give this one a solid 4.4 and I gladly recommend this...You got my vote....