Another banger by glorious Celipse, Already starting off with a blast. Can't wait to see where this goes.
I love the story but I'm embarrassed because I can't read all the chapters because it is premium t
this sht would be so incriminating in court ??
please continue author I like it a lot and hope for more chapters
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
First of all I would like to say im not a person who goes and spreads negativity and neither do I want to usually, u have a good world building and and good writing skills but Fuck u man… how does a being that’s supposed to have 1000x more intelligence and processing power than a normal human make mistakes that even a hobo living on the streets with a hint of common sense won’t make .? Like seriously ?? He thinks of his sister after his world domination from the underworld(like wtf is that ? That’s just a chunni dream that provides no benifits) … and after he knows that people are going to go after him and his family because of what he is , even after being given a warning from shadow that people will go after him , he doesn’t explain anything to his family …. Just says that he “needs to do this” for his parents and lets them roam around freely in a world where just a few hours ago they were surrounded by govt people who wanted to get them to make him listen ………. Bro all I can say is that u are a new author and are just trying to find a way to write overpowered mc story , but this is just not how to do it. I will freely admit that writing a story is not something I am capable of but thank god atleast I didn’t write this monstrosity of a novel . Absolute garbage .
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Do y’all know where I can get access to this for FREE?
My first read in Web Novel. It bounded me so good that all I can say is, 'I'll never forget it'. ^_^
Okay, let's see, I read through it and caught up quite quickly since the chapters weren't too long. The story doesn't have a 5/5 rating from me since I noticed a lot of grammar mistakes and typos, not any usage of unique words, even though she was explaining from the Author's Narrative, also using the word "Mum" seemed a bit too unprofessional. Though, the story was pretty fast-paced which is what readers like, Just the two first chaps alone moved like from 1 to 50. Like in the first chapter she got an order to save someone who's been kidnapped and boom step-sister in the next chapter. Overall it was a good read, I recommend reading it!!
Author's shameless review hereI'm not gonna lie. This book is an inspiration gotten from Jasmin Josef's Married to the Devils's Son and Ash_Knight's The Crowns Obsession. If you've read both books and love them, give this author a chance and check it out. Also, don't forget to leave a review too.
everything about this is so amazing each and everything is really great The way the story is getting explained is so good cant't wait for more chapters to drop!!