Very good story so far and it is very different from other stories and has an interesting plot so far. Ihope you keep updating this story very interested on how the rest of the story if going to proceed!
Author mandatory review :)This story will explore many stuff, including tournaments and some fun times.MC won't shy away from doing a necessary thing to make his disciples stronger. And don't worry, MC is also strong af thanks to his willpower and experience.Anyway, shoot your question here. I'll take it all
Just a heads up but there is a fanfiction with more chapters, same storyline and everything
How many chapters can be expected? Hopefully it doesn't stretch unnecessarily. One thing I like add that, so far this book is not that typical purely written where fl can't come to end with her feelings and emotions about ml. Rather she has a clear picture and stands her ground, as she should. But if author is planning to bring them both together then ml needs good lesson. There is now way he can get back fl which he doesn't deserve. Until and unless he goes to 200% redemption. Let's be clear here he treated her like trash for 5 years. He has not even twisted but cheap mindset while wearing polish attire. Like for him his problem, opinion everything matters but fl existence was not worth bet an eye on. Author take time while writing no problem. But till the time he doesn't realise all the deeds he had done, what did he cause, the consequences, the pain fl felt everything, evrything should and must come back to him. We r talking about second chance love and that comes with cost and karma. SO AUTHOR PLEASE DON'T TURN THIS WORK LIKE THOSE LOW IQ ML AND LOW ESTEEM FL BOOK. I thought this would be like that but as I read. I'm glad I was wrong so far. (129 ch in). AUTHOR GREAT WORK.
it actually is a good story honestly not going to lie it does have similarities to a few stories like this the good thing about this one is it stays at a steady pace doesn't go too fast it doesn't drag not a lot of over explaining definitely one I can come back to on a later date
Loving the story... can't wait to read more??
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This book has a nice plot, it is good even though it is being updated slowly
Overall a good start, the author certainly has talent. However the development would benefit from some adjustments. Sometimes following between the chapters is a bit difficult. This is something that can certainly be improved. Apart from that it is interesting. I think that this story has great potential.
If you are interested in novels about world wide transmigration, unique world building, special systems and fantasy overall give this novel a try! Also reviews are extremely valued (even if it’s low stars) they will all be greatly appreciated. If you have any suggestions for the future of the novel just comment and I will take it into consideration.
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"ok well be back by 8 dinners almost done"