The writing is pleasant to read, the world building is also quite interesting but the update frequency is really strong I definitely recommend this book???
What can I say. I always wanted to write a book and even had world building plus start and ending made into a draft but always felt kinda cringe writing it as I never wrote anything before and the dialogues always felt awkward. But now with the help of AI I can flesh out my ideas and the dialogues can finally be made some sense. I know I am bad at writing so along the days, months, years that I take to finish this story I'll improve as a writer and make changes to old chapters. My first story Idea was from 2019 and it was kinda like shadow slave but I didn't have the knowledge or courage to write it and now after I read SS I really loved it. It was so much better than I could have ever written. Hopefully someday I can write a book with such great writing.Anyway its been a long post but please be kind to me.
The writing and story are great. I really enjoy the mc and his developments. I think this novel needs more love and the author needs more appreciation. The first couple chapter have some grammar errors by the author hired a editor to smooth it out and is also taking English classes. I appreciate the author trying his best to improve the quality of his writing. Most authors never take advice or try to improve they’re novels and just delete comments about it. So Mr. Author of ya read this just know that you’re doing a great job and I hope to see more of your great work. ???
frustrating, that is the main feeling this book leaves me with, and i gave it a chance, I read 500 chapters.The author went too far into the low key theme, main character hides too much too frequently and often for no reason, that leads to piled up frustration in how the plot develops.i like a more balanced story with different phases/responses where the same mc adapts and acts weak/strong , hides/shows off situationally instead of a single dimensional plot that always ends up in the same way.This story is not for me and if you are like me and would find that frustrating then avoid.
I was then working as a test pilot with the NASA's aircrafts division. I had made a
She also remember how the great General Stephen begging for mercy, before she could end the life of the general. Suddenly someone shot the general. Atleast he was already dead, but she still must find this assassin.
Pietro frowned as he observed Ultron, the metal man looking down at his creation, "And what will your first act as 'god' be?"
※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※
All that glitters is gold
Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming
The water's getting warm so you might as well swim
As he walked up the aisle towards the stadium/stage, he noticed some people staring at him