shameless review from this author come one readers i don't care if you focus on romance but i know there's a small community of kingdom building lovers and world building so come on comment and give me your ideas
I don't write reviews but I am gonna try this time. Well the MC is very hard to understand and he/she just does whatever they want and the side characters are just plain stupid they do things so that the MC can look cool like for example a restaurant customer is your reservation is not here and than the manager barges in apologizes to the MC and fires the employee it is fine if it has 1 aor 2 such scene in like 10 ch but this is like every single chapter which I don't like and than instead of overpowering their opponents the MC just drags the fight until it is tiring ( I am speaking about chapters over 100) 1 to 99 ch is pretty good i think
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Well, I liked where the story was going, but the problem is in the characters and how the book is written. First of all, the characters don't seem realistic at all as they get easily swayed by Mc as if they're NPC's. Even more, hus supposed background of tyranny is nowhere to be seen as it is explained that his empire is actually not crumbling at all despite everything the previous emperor supposedly did. There are plenty of examples to be found if you think a bit about it.Alas, my biggest problem is with the writing style. The way it's written feels too much like AI, with its constant poetic type of writing and annoying tone. It's unnerving as it gives the same feeling as the uncanny valley but with reading. It feels stretched and dishonest. It would be okay if it was used occasionally in some epic or monumental climaxes, but it's literally used everywhere, which strips its "epic" and "serious" vibe and just leaves it with a floppy AI aftertaste.Anyway, I love the idea and wish the author luck in finding the right path. After all, it's a very hard thing to write.
Bro Hari, make the pacing a bit more slow. Cuz everthing is happening so fast and its like a brief of the story. AND MAKE A COVER PAGE FASTT!
It would be really great if the author writes the mc's and his late wife's past as a side story, and his daughters' childhood ( from young age to 17 yo) as a side story.
"Aargh, I can't believe you say that but don't tell me that you were serious about what you said in the old mansion we were in?"
I scowled
A year passed and now i was feeling as if my kingdom was getting worse, they don't me as there queen.÷( They think my old sister Marlo should be their queen, but mother chose me instead...
The hero then used his vast experience to dodge and defend against the vampire's attacks and in the meantime, try to open some loophole to hit her.
My Edward and I, then, are happy: and the more so, because those we most love are happy likewise. Diana and Mary Rivers are both married: alternately, once every year, they come to see us, and we go to see them. Diana's husband is a captain in the navy, a gallant officer and a good man. Mary's is a clergyman, a college friend of her brother's, and, from his attainments and principles, worthy of the connection. Both Captain Fitzjames and Mr. Wharton love their wives, and are loved by them.
Didn't make sense not to live for fun