Book is pretty good, I haven’t read to far into it but it is very funny and has an interesting premise.
as a recommendation i suggest rewriting the story for more of a coherent flow besides that it is good
review for FP.....................................
I like the story and the plot I just hate the story development because it’s TAKING VERY VERY LONG im currently in chapter 160 I think and only one month has passed in the story which can tell a lot because I recently read another novel which at around chap 160 I mostly think that this is taking so long because the author adds MANY Unnecessary details such as (this is a small spoiler) for anyone that likes that story when you get to the part where mc (frost) assist Leo in his fight with his uncle when the attack starts you can skip the next 15 chapters which would be a total waste of time and many other parts where author just spends 3-5 chapters just explaining minor details
Great start, writing is great but confusing at times. Characters are great and a great first chapter.
Very nice novel. I like how you introduced the characters with a relatable approach that most readers can see in a daily routine of life. The way you describe what the characters are doing is nearly flawless. So far, the development is coming along smoothly. I can't wait to read more and see what other ideas you come up with since it's only getting started.
Nice workkk! This novel has potential a lot. Please continue updating author nim <3
Great book author amazing world building and very deep characters
violex: Electrifying tale of self discovery! Gripping plot, vivid world building relatable characters.it a very nice novel . I love the writing quality.kudos to the author
First book. Review: "Kill La Death"!It's like those action movies where everything's going down, but with a sprinkle of magic and a side of weirdness. Meito, the rookie detective, is totally in over his head, but he's got a crazy crew to back him up. Lan, the strategist, is always one step ahead, and Nodo, the muscle guy, is a total hype-man with some weird Uno card powers (yeah, you heard that right).They're up against The Architect, a psycho killer who wants to end the world, and they've gotta stop him before it's too late. The story's full of insane battles, world-bending powers, and some seriously questionable decisions. It's like if Sherlock Holmes and Naruto had a baby and that baby grew up in a world where the rules don't apply.Basically, it's a wild ride that'll keep you on the edge of your seat.
Let's goo, imagine the 100th run on Royal Road but with a competent evil mc instead of a goody-two-shoes. Also, the power system seems to be inspired from Omniscient Reder's Viewpoint and Undying Immortal System.
apocalypse and space, my favourite kind of novel! looking forward to more ?