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Wow! This is probably one of the best first two chapters I've read in a long time. Does the author have any other work? Either way, I'm a huge fan. Awesome original story and interesting MC. I can't wait to find out where this is heading.
Hi. The author here. This is a based of a world I have been creating for a long time. Gonna publish at least 3000-4000 words a week so be expecting 2-3 updates a week at first at least. I know my writing is the weakest part of my novel, but I am extremely happy to get criticism since I want to improve on the parts I am lacking so if you find a grammar mistake can you tell me what mistake and where? It might be a one I didn't just spot or is just a mistake I have been repeating a lot.Thank you all
I'm writing a review just because i saw many 5 stars for some unknown reason, like i don't understand why are they even reading the same thing as i am? or something else entirely different? well i guess we will never know.
Not usually a fan of isekai but this one was a blast to read. Looking forward to see it get updated and to see where the story would go from here.
I didn't expect to find a book where the author actually explains what qi could be and doesn't use plotarmor in a vague way like cultivation works because of qi and qi is qi. I like how the author thinks and didn't find obvious mistakes in the math and science parts. there are a few minor points that could lead to a strong power creep between the later stages if you consider that core cultivators can already destroy mountains from a distance but it should be fine if he stops the exponential growth he currently has between the stages. sure fighting higher stages should be almost impossible but it shouldn't be 1000 vs 1 that is one stage higher and the one is winning without problems or getting hit. at least after the core stage where everyone knows techniques and has a good amount of qi.but that is just me rambling about things that are hard to balance and would be normally readjusted over time while writing but because it is WN and we read the first version, the author has to think more about thinks like that because it is so hard to rewrite entire scenes or plot points.
WELL LETS SEE.WRITING QUALITY 5STABLILTY 3STORY DEV 3CHARACTER DESIGN 5WORLD BACKGROUND 5
Very interesting plot . keep it up . this work is very unique
Good plotline but i feel like there are some instances of awkward phrasing and bad grammar. Nice pace, paragphs are easy on the eyes which makes it an enjoyable read. I'd love to see how far this author will go! Good luck!
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Completely average nothing new introduced everything is just to basic it’s good but not good enough.Completely average nothing new introduced everything is just to basic it’s good but not good enough.
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