It's the best novel I've ever read in my life. Good luck to you and finish it quickly. We're waiting for you ?
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Interesting start of the story I can’t wait to see what will come of this book
I just read this, and I have to say the author has put in so much work and detail in it, which is something you don't see a lot nowadays in books.The book hooks you from the start and keeps you wanting more and more. This definitely needs more recognition. Good job, fellow author.I really enjoyed this.
Your web novel demonstrates a strong foundation with its mix of magic, action, and personal development. The protagonist’s journey from an uncertain fighter to a key player in a war is captivating, and the blend of magic and martial skills adds an exciting dynamic to the plot. The world-building, including the guilds, dungeons, and the political tension between kingdoms, is well-thought-out, giving the reader a sense of scale and depth.Character relationships, like the bond between the protagonist and Kessia, provide emotional grounding amid the action, creating a nice balance between personal growth and larger conflicts. The inclusion of powerful figures, such as Lyria and the kingdom's strongest magician, adds to the tension and stakes of the story, making it feel epic in scope.However, some aspects could benefit from further polishing. The pacing of certain events, especially during battles, can be overwhelming at times, leaving less room for reflection or emotional impact. Additionally, the protagonist’s inner thoughts and emotions could be explored further to strengthen the reader's connection to them.Overall, the novel shows great promise with its creative world and character development, but refining the pacing and emotional depth will make it even more engaging.
I feel the Ntr in this isn’t needed tbh , almost like there’s no reason why there should be Ntr at all. Would there be a redemption arc later?
Great job author! The synopsis is superb! So far, I love the story development, I think Alex is such a brave lady! Looking forward to your growth!
promising idea, interesting so far......
I just had to leave another review if you have the opportunity please pick up this novel it's just pure excellence and it hasn't even really got started yet and can only get better from here jumping in now would be the wisest choice
This story is great, and you can tell the author puts a lot of love and time into fleshing out the characters and story. I recommend this highly!
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Sup I'm voting out of good will, as an author who has a novel that's pretty much at the bottom rank its nice to see one that's basically made for free instead of locked chapters but it's fine to lock chapters if writing is basically ur job lol. I really wish the best for us not well known authors lmao