on the first chapter...there are some mistakes in punctuation that causes confusion in understanding the sentences .. however the story seems to be promising....so I'll give 5 stars (◕ᴗ◕✿)
This changed my life in many ways. I'll never live my life the same again . What a magnificent well-written novel used with great creativity and innovation. The start of this story sucks bum cuz its a parody, but it gets better
Read the first 2 chapters and then tried to see if it gets better later on but the story is very descriptive, the style is a bit monotone and slow but jumps over details and sometimes it feels like things just appear out of nowhere. The concept was interesting but the grammar issues are not small. :/
The novel is very good but it seems that the author has a strange fetish, it's better to make ye shengge the main MC rather than the 75-25 damn, and make xia wanyue the protagonist of OG whose harem is kidnapped by ye shengge isn't this included in NTR because wanyue has 25% lol
Disclaimer: I don't normally write reviews without reading much more chapters, but since the work doesn't have any others I'll give it a start. BTW I'm leaving this review at Ch. 17.The writing quality is excellent as well as the characters that you meet. There is a lot of things that aren't mentioned at the beginning which seems a little lazy, but it might also be a method of making you think about things and want to read more to answer your questions. Can't say much about background as you don't see much at the moment. Though the update schedule seems quite concerning. Definitely has potential and has a good start, a few clichés here and there, but those make a good novel if used right. Honestly I think it will be a good novel at least and hope the author continues to make it work. Good Luck to you author! P.S. If it gets up to Ch. 100 someday I'll make another review then.
Honestly the thing that really sets this apart has gotta be the world building. There are so many stories where humans are just on top of the food chain because "There's just so many of them" or "They breed faster than pests, and spread everywhere just as fast" or the most annoying "They are a short lived species, and we must guide them with patience as we would our own children
"you'll see in a second." he replied.
I left home and went to the school.
"Yes, but on the bright side, I have the antidote for his disease with me. I plan to give it to him once he arrives and explain everything to him, too. The plan was to only explain this to father, but I knew you were going to hear anyway, and I know I can trust you with this information."
"Why's that?" Charles asked a bit perplexed. He had seen some of the other boys doing that but wasn't able to understand the reasoning.
3)I want my little brother to be 12 inches" said Nathan to God
Shen Jian "As I feel he would make a great Sword mountain disciple."