super bro Best of luck ?? ???? nice writing ?
Around 40 chapters inI honestly had high hopes going to this story and it started out pretty good decent premise guy goes into a tribal society has to implement some degree of modern day thinking but he's not some sort of genius who automatically knows everything unlike a lot of other protagonists a pretty good start. Unfortunately it take the downturn shortly after the beginning you have first of all the goblin women basically all being supermodels I mean I can appreciate the idea of sexualizing goblins but at the same time the whole idea of them being goblins is that they are distinctly not human additionally as it goes on after the initial crisis in the story they start showing that not only do they have individual skills which is something you'd expect from a tribal society but then they go on to show that they are actually masters or prodigies even when compared to people in the outside world and I'm like how how did they reach this this is not on the level of a tribal society anymore this is on the level of like a fractured civilization and that is going against kind of the initial premise that the author was trying to set forth. The author introduces the demon King element into the plot line pretty much really early on after like the initial one or two crisis and they haven't really established themselves very much or even the outside world very much having really no interaction with the outside world in the protagonist is going oh I have an ominous feeling that we need to deal with this demon king figure even though they have no idea what really the history of this world is. I will go on and say that the novel is not bad, but it is not good either there are many other novels of the similar premise and have the whole goblin thing going on that do a better job or at least aim for more realistic goal point without trying to do everything if you really want something from the goblin archetype I can't say this is a bad choice but I honestly just can't give this series anymore thought because there's so many other things more interesting that are available author I wish you luck in the future but I recommend trying to solidify your storytelling base before expanding outward and try to get a hold of your character development than a much more straightforward manner. Good luck
The opening chapter of the novel is a powerful and intense introduction that immediately draws the reader into Anna Wallace's harrowing world. The author masterfully sets the scene with vivid descriptions of the rain-soaked, desolate streets, creating a sense of isolation and despair that mirrors Anna's emotional state. Keep it up ?
This is a unique story, and i like it. This reminds me of GATE manga story. I will stay tune to read it again. Keep updating! you do a great work.
Very nice......................
yooo damn you damn you both you and immortals are mad
This is really good. Welldone. I'll love to read more
I just came for the FP given for review ?
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This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
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A very good story with a engaging plot and a good pace. the situation of kage in academy I give you that excellent job but the descriptions can be improved other then that . it's a very good story