raw 功法都有熟练度the story is not bad but get stale for me after 170 chapters. but one thing for sure if this wants to get picked, that is the translation quality has to go up. One week worth? seriously? 一周 usually mean one complete cycle in cultivation term.
You've joined my #Top 3 author group. The story is developed better than I can comprehend
As of now it's pretty much boring to read and the quality of translation is not that bad but not good either. Not much is going on right now beside a few world background info dumps and confusing things that takes a chapter whole that's irrelevant to the story plot. The first few chapters are confusing as heck. First he regressed then after 7 days later he transmigrated to another World? What's the point of regression plot if he gonna transmigrated anyway?
Again....the concept is really good...it is confusing with how the entire story is jumping throughout through out the ch without explaining much...but I like this idea....and mc is pretty good...so yeah...you could read it if ignore some confusing parts...over all I feel it's good...worth reading
The MC isn't a hero he's a creep.
I thought it would be good. I'm disappointed.
Mediocre with cringe sprinkled on it.The writing was decent until the trainwreck of POV shifts that popular novels suffer from. From there, we get the repetition of events, but with slightly more info from another character. At times, the grammar suffers. There can be run-on sentences and the descriptions sometimes repeat themselves too.Example: “Most of them preferred to hunt though, it was the most honorable type of work in the tribe, hunting down beasts and protecting your family was an honor for these people.”Fixed: “Protecting your family was an honor for these people, but most of them preferred hunting down beasts, which was the most honorable type of work in the tribe.Suggested: “Most of them preferred hunting down beasts, since it protected their family, which was the most honorable type of work in the tribe.”The updates look to be regular, with 9 or less page chapters.The story looked promising until it hit the brick wall of the tribesmen. Instead of heading to the city and getting ready to build up his sect, he helps random people and stays with them. Cue the pages and pages of backstory for them and then how they feel. If the author wanted a more organic story, he could have the MC ask the tribesmen for their story, instead of being forced to switch to the tribesmen’s POV and tell us. Show, don’t tell. Like, you could’ve had an emotional moment with that young tribesman by having him cry about his suffering. Instead, we watch like voyeurs on National Geographic.With characters, the MC is pathetic. There should be a missing “comedy” tag, but it’s cringeworthy to watch. He has all this power and is reduced to idly standing by. Like wtf? When he was following the tribesmen, why tf did he disappear? So many unnecessary conflicts happen. The other characters are described, but you can’t really care about them since it reads like an infodump. It’s the problem of telling instead of showing.The world background is just there in between forced reoccurring gags that the MC is dumb or messes up.
Does this really work? I tried to cultivate other than calming the mind nothing else happens. And also I have read more than 100 wuxia novels
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I want to invent a time machine to go back in time to make a lot of money, catch the author and put him on a chain forcing him to produce 10 chapters a day ))
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
The story seems good and the only thing that needs fixing is the grammar as some sentences are weird and ruin the immersion. The MC also seems questionable at times, but I’m hoping he’ll get better as the author continues the story. I’m also biased though as the story reminds me of “Everybody Else Is A Returnee”. Can’t wait for more!