A compelling story and great world building is enough to keep me glued ???. Guaranteed to keep you hooked
more more more more more more more more morr
The concept of the story is nice, something that is not very common but is still intriguing and can catch the reader's curiosity and interest. The writing quality is also good and quite descriptive. My only concern is that since this is an action genre, I wish you had given an early demonstration of how music will be used in action... Is this gonna be something like the anime 'Takt Op. Destiny' ?... If you have seen that already.
nice,you did a great job. I haven't read all of the other chapters yet,but the first chapter so far was good
sigh peak mannn where did you go goat we need more peak ???but getting more serious now out of all the extra's genre novel's I read this really unique and very interesting and outside the box view for a story telling for a dark fantasy type and honestly i love that because it feels so fresh it does remind me of one of my top three favorite in the extra genre and I belive this has so much potential Keep up the great work and please release a chapter or two or let us know if this is going to be dropped or maybe go on a hiatus
I am definitely a shameless author so ofc i'm going to give my book five star I wll tell again this a book is centered around the tags netorare, cuckold where the main character is cuckolded so be warned at last who will give 1 star
i hate making reviews. too much work.but this book deserves it . at least for me it fits what i like .
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Please stop this, please ... someone please help me, please help me ....
"There's no-where else to go. Not for a while anyway," He said. "It's only a month. That's all. After that, I'm home free."
"Ofcourse! In fact, he is here with me but is a little bit shy to come in…Can you call him for me?" Audrey said and the young girl hurried dashed to the entrance to look for the kid…
'Military school?' He thought. 'If he is just applying to military school, then how old is he? And how in the world was he able to develop that?'