A good book which has a very nice balance of story and romance.From the first few chapters one can get a proper vibe of the book. This sets up a pretty good foundation for the rest of the story. The story never tries to be other than it was introduced in the beginning, as a result we have a very grounded approach to the story progression. The mc is op but that’s never the concern of this book, the main focus is building relationships and personalities. The book adds a lot of new elements to the ‘Extra’ genre. We start with basic mc dying but intrestingly he wasn’t the one who met the Godess, someone else wished for the mc to be transmigrated. But the story he is sent to is a transmigrated Villain story. Its just intresting to see how the author just subtly incorporated this into the story. Normally I am not in the favor is systems but the system in this book has a unique charm and personality. Its actually a partner than a robotic quest generator. Writing quality of the book is actually pretty good with a good pace. The mc has a smart personality and does not act interact with the other 2 protagonists. He has in own goals and isn’t scared to change the events of the story. Nor does he care about the plot. Another important pro is that the author is actually active in communication. Even though the book has 160+ chapters , I still have a high chance of getting a reply from the author for a comment on the 40th chapter. This is very rare for most books. Again there are always some flaws like the academy tag, just being a plot device for introducing characters. I would also appreciate a bit more slice of life aspect to the story. It would be nice if the personalities and feelings of the FL’s would be more flushed out. I would have also appreciated a bit more world building. Because we somtimes I feel like we are dealing with a more medival vibe with magical devices but the next day our mc is in a amusement park going on a rollercoaster or someone is using a mini recording device to stay the mc. All in all this might not be the most unique book out there but the book knows what niche it is satisfying. And that’s something which I value very much, as from the beginning to the end I am getting what I paid for.This is a very good book for a casual reader and hope more people support and read this book in the future.
Nice work nice work very good of you keep it up
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The way the author explains more of the novel, makes it more interesting than ever .. more updates author
I too hate math but reading this, i realize we have no choice but to love it. Nice progression so far, the events come at quite a steady - average pace. The MC vector is a relatable character. Other characters too are relatable. And the mathematical stuff?, the author must really know math, the calculations are blowing my mind. This is a story I'll be following. Will continue reading now, keep it up imichoo!.
Well this my first time writing a story and i feel like I'm doing a great job. Anyways please share your comments. Thanks for reading
Interesting. Keep writing may inspiration always find you and an omelette in your pocket ?
I'm the creator, so this is 100% biased.
The starting of the novel is good even though just a few chapters is written as it socks you right into the world that the author created. The system is also unique as the readers will find out once you read it. I hope the author continues to write the story.
The story gives the vibes of a classic Shounen Anime. Of course, it is very well written and the first few chapters have the intense that gets the read hook in reading the story. Keep writing and upload more chapters, author.
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The updates are.... REALLY inconsistent. I warn anyone who gets into this that the author did not update for a very very long time. But I do find this one to be really interesting, and I hope you guys will give it a chance.Author, if you're reading this.... pls update :sob: