PilinyTheYoungerrbA
just came for the free fp given for review
I'm really enjoying every aspect of this novel, keep going author ?
This is an entertaining superhero story that should appeal to fans of the genre. Although I haven't read a huge amount of superhero stories, I enjoy them and think this one has lots of potential. Style: The style of this story is casual and pretty direct, there's no purple prose or over description of things really, it's straightforward and pretty clear about what's going on. Grammar: I think I noticed a couple typos, but nothing that really distracted me from the story at all, so I didn't have any problems with the grammar, it reads like normal to me!Characters: Hope seems like a cool main character who I look forward to following as she grows. I'm not sure what the future holds for her but I think she will continue to develop strengths and hopefully become part of a meaningful community. Story: I am not very familiar with superhero stories in general, but so far this seems like a good set-up for lots of interesting events to take place. The super powers mentioned seem strong and though I can't really guess where the plot is going to go, it should be interesting. Overall a promising start up to where I've read!
It's a fascinating novel with complex world-building and attractive characters. It's also unique among the apocalypse novels I've read before, and I've read a lot of them because I like this genre. It may be just my preference, but I find the plot, especially the romance, a bit too fast-paced. Though, so far, there's so much potential for this novel.
This is easily one of the best novels ever!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its suspenseful and surprising and you can never guess what'll happen next! This is one of my first novel and I did not regret reading it at all!
Well u can tell dat d writer took some inspiration from shadow slave ? but I'm loving it so far
This author is freaking pathetic. He copied and pasted the starting story from "Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game". The author didn't even bother to change a single content apart from the names. What a disappointment.
When passing through the family room, it seems my mother is watching a news program on 'OrbWatcher'.
"This the place Jieee?"
I logged back on to my Pokémon game and found that my Eevee's red spots where darker than before. My Eevee started acting weird so I fed it and logged out...
"Trust me, Goku, it's important." Piccolo told his old rival, already knowing what the news was.
me? why me? couldn't he get another girl? she thought to herself, she shook her head.
