time for a review. i've been reading this for almost a month (im upset that i didn't find this gem sooner) and five chapters in, i got hooked. this book has great character relationships and world building (so far)! you'll occasionally say "awww" whenever the main character interacts with her little sister because you could feel their love for each other through the screen. now, it's not just her little sister, the people around her trust her so much that you'll question their motives. i could already tell that there will be a twist on a twist on another twist and it will make my jaw drop. i also saw the author's comment on another review saying that there will be male and female love interests, and so far, there are four love interests introduced. two female and two male. the MC's reaction when the second female love interest suddenly made her heart go badum badum was hilarious. the romance is already brewing and things get more interesting! can't wait for more chapters to see what will happen.
It's a pretty good and interesting story, it was also very funny at times but the harem kinda ruined it for me.'OH wow the MC is the only person who doesn't get scared of my cold/mean personality, now I like him''The MC was nice to me when I was a child and now he is the only thing I can think about, he is my everything''When I broke through to the Golden Core realm the MC had to rape me in order to save my life, now I'm in love with him'And so far, all the girls are okay with him having multiple girls or simply ignore it.It does not make any sense. If you're going to put romance in your novel then at least do it well, doing a harem is the most laziest and unoriginal type of romance there is.
Off to a great start! Waiting to hear more.
Good story hope you give it a try would recommend.
Author here giving a slightly biased review to help get the ball rolling as well as clarifying a few details.1) Since English is my first language the grammar and quality of writing is more than readable however, I will make mistakes so please point them out, always appreciate grammar catchers ?2) Regarding the issues with the MC I'd like to clarify that regardless of his intelligent or how old his body portrays him to be, he is still a new born. His personality hasn't had a chance to develop and all his emotions are new. He's similar to a child, innocent, curious and prone to exaggerated emotions i.e. may be similar to those cliché Japanese protagonists however that is only in the beginning.3) Many people have stopped reading the novel, both on web novel and royal road after the first few chapters mainly due to the MC and FMC quirks and they leave comments detailing as such. I would like if you could give the novel a chance, read at least the first dozen or so chapters before casting judgement as the quirks of the MC are rounded off as he develops (less cheesy). If after that you still don't find it to your taste, fair enough.For the story itself I feel that it's well built, with rich character progression and a diverse world.The story although called Dungeon of Niflheim is not solely about dungeons. It follows the dungeon core itself and his adventures within the world of Nova. There will be dungeon building and dungeon battle elements but they won't really shine until later in the story.
absolutely perfect.There is not a single chapter where u will feel bored.great job author ,will be waiting for upcoming chapters?.And yes if possible increase Romance scenes with Solara.
Shameless author here giving himself a Five star rating. This is mostly an outline. But you will be able to understand what is going on from different chapters. I will take any advise, ideas and anything else. Hope you all enjoy the story.
LECTOR IS SO COOL ( LIKE MAGE ASSASSIN)
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I saw the system, and I came running as it is my cup of tea. Like it so far...Will wait for more chapters...
story development slow. I think he has been stuck on 11 years old for a while now. like, come on, get in trouble enough that you gota go rescue liana. or liana gets taken unless he shows his true self. forced to go school. something.
Not to long finish all the chapters. So far the book is well thought out. It not just a romantic apocalyptic novel. It has characters development as well as a compelling story. Thus I conclude it's good so far.