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okay I actually love the the idea for the book, the grammar is great no mistakes from what I've seen so far but I'm wondering why he's going saying he remembers his past life like its not like he just telling some close people but literally almost everyone, and also in the beginning when he went to village that was attacked why didn't they never talk about the people that attacked them.
I wonder who the little girl is and why would someone want to hurt her or what’s going on? I’m at the edge of my seat like always. 300,000,000 that’s a lot of money and the way you went about spending it is very smart so far it appears!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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I remember the author saying he won't make this a harem despite mmc aving multiple love interests I have a feeling they won't live till the end of the tale R.I.P
Its just bad really bad that's all I can say how the ratings are so high is beyond me lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
Author, I must've hit the jackpot today because your story is AMAZING! My only problem is, why haven't you hit a 1000 views yet ?! The writing is amazing and the plot is really, really interesting, gives me nostalgia. I love this, DO NOT ABANDON IT OR I WILL FIND YOU IN YOUR SLEEP!The other problem is long paragraphs. Divide them into two or three parts and you'll be fine!
The emotional stakes in this chapter are insane, and I want to talk about how Wen Zhiyu approached the entire Pei Yan situation. She walked into that office convinced she was already defeated. Her opening move wasn't to fight or demand respect—she offered to leave with nothing. Not because she wanted to, but because she genuinely believed that's what she deserved. That's the internal conflict driving everything: she doesn't trust that she could be loved by him. Meanwhile, the external stakes were equally high. Chu Wanning had turned their marriage into a public joke, and if Wen Zhiyu hadn't confronted her, that lie would've become permanent. The business angle added real financial stakes too—Chu Wanning had invested two million yuan based on false pretenses. If Pei Yan walked away from the contract, her company would face a devastating gap. But the most interesting conflict is the one between what Wen Zhiyu thinks and what Pei Yan knows. She thinks he's keeping a mistress; he knows she's imagining things. Every time she apologizes for misunderstanding, he's just... patient. That tension between her fear and his steadiness is what makes the whole relationship feel so real. And the ending—Pei Yan asking about her period—wasn't just a joke. It was him crossing a threshold, signaling that he's not going to pretend this marriage is just a formality. The stakes just went from 'will she survive this marriage' to 'what happens next when he actually wants her.'
So, according to novelupdates there are over 1700 chapters in the country of origin and we are stuck at 1028. Please start translating again.
Trial Read Review (only from synopsis):(X:ICATDOHP) - So the protagonist gets reincarnated with the power to change the dates (how old or young they are) of herbs. He is a herb disciple (good for him) and since plants are more powerful when older, he modifies the plants and consumes them making him stronger. Not going to lie, this plot seems mediocre and bland. Maybe I will check it out.(YTIBIWBMS) - This is one of those talent stealing novels. That is literally all the synopsis covers and it doesn't really talk much about the plot. There have already been many novels similar to this one and I will only check it out if I am bored.(ITRWISG) - Basically, the protagonist is in a modern world where he can see stats and stuff like a game while no one else can’t. This plot has been overused so much and usually comes with an extra plate of face slapping. The sad thing is that I’m already full.(MR) - Out of all of the other trial novels this time, this seems like the one with the most plot and potential. Honestly, I can’t really understand what the plot is because the synopsis is short but it hooks you into the story (somewhat). I will check it out.(P9Y:AAMFFY) - Protagonist transmigrates into the modern world and gets a funeral system. He also has a funeral company (you can see where this is going). Basically, he can make amazing things happen at your funeral, but that’s all. Unique plot but honestly kind of lackluster. Maybe I will read it.(LOTP:IRAMSFTS) - Guy can get land and stuff and summon succubi and this plot is overused and seems generic blah blah blah (hey, it’s like 2:00 for me over here, don’t blame me for being sloppy). Anyway, bad. Wouldn’t recommend it.
Just started reading the book and it's a good one. I love the handsome character with flowing white hair..The book has potential and would surely reach places