At the very end of my last breath, I swore.
and someone smiled
Naturally Ling Tian would not sit idly by and let this happen.
This is not my cup of tea. After reading the first 20 chapters I stopped. Especially from the readers' prospect of view, I don't like the decision Mc made, such as Mc's Lapdog and the thought process along with it.
everything is ok but story develops too op.
Dear Readers, Thank you for reading and subscribing to my book. This book is the third part of my series @end of the world. The book can be read on its own but I encourage you to read the previous books (Which have been revised) if you have time.I thank all the readers who had given me good suggestions and comments and I've incorporated most of them into the rewrite of my previous two books and into my new book.If you have any comments or suggestions on how you like the story to evolve, please feel free to comment here or in the Chapter comments.Thanks for Reading.
Alright guys it’ been a great run but however after 1615 chapters is official I’ve went broke to the others who have fallen to this pit with me I hope you rise back however I might not be able to continue this journey with you goodbye fellow broke high schoolers
I actually don't write reviews that much. BUT I just want to say, this novel is all over the place. There's not a single chapter where I am not cringing, horrible description of magic, characters have no personalities of their own. Just follows most Chinese stories. And it's a harem, by the way, shouldn't have read it from the beginning. This may look like I am dissing the Author but please do. The story has so much potential if it was just made well. The harem dragged it downhill with the BS author was talking about his magic. The conversations were also very awkward. I just can't.
love this story the battle tactics used are very clever and the world building is coming along nicley can,t wait to see where this story goes
Hey guys!! A typical shameless author’s review is here. First of all, I’d like to say thanks to anyone who is reading this novel and supporting me. You know, every view, review, collection, and power stone mean so much to me. They give me motivations to continue writing this story.Alright, that’s enough for the formality.Let’s talk about the storyline. The story is mainly about an MC going back in time to fix the past and create a new/different future for him and human race. But as the story progresses, the MC will realize and discover that there is much more to the supposed simple backstory of his regression. As for what it is or what they are, you have to read it yourself.Now, for the story’s pace. For the reason of I want to lay as solid foundation as possible to the story, it might cause the pace of the story to be moderate at most at the beginning. Especially, the first 15 chapters of which being focused on some basic knowledge about magic, Ortus, tutorial, his future organization, his friends, and many more. That’s why, when the story progresses to tutorial ark or Ortus ark, you would not get confused with the info dump.Last but not least, the plots of the story. I can only tell you that, I’ve already planned the main concept and some big events to half of the volume 3. It is just a plan though, it might get changed into another one if I find something better or new inspiration.P.S: English is not my first language, so, please bear with me :D
This is not just a random bot account or spam, this review is as real as it can be and this novel is really great if you like extremely op yet slowly but surely growing mc. The flow and the twists. If given some time to grow famous, this novel would do fairly well. This is coming from someone who has read multiple novels and is the truth and nothing but the truth. Also, author-kun, I hope that if you do decide to write another novel, please don't keep the previous owner's soul within the body of the reincarnated mc. Its kinda aesthetically unpleasing. XD Thank you for the chapters.
Reviewing after reading a few chapters...This novel really packs a punch. It does not hold back with its bluntness, and it is highly informative to boot. The personality of the author shows in his writing, and I personally believe we can be friends irl with his perspective. I like the historical references, and I like how the narration points out the absurdity of some, or most, of them. The storytelling feeds you something, and you can easily digest it no problem. I admit, I'm also a sucker for the comedic elements of this novel. Well done, Mr. Author.