Interesting concept, I'll admit. The main problems I have with it are the horrendous grammar, annoying/unnatural dialogues, and horrible handling of the third and first-person rules (stop switching!).The best thing about this novel is the update stability. If you can turn off your brain and get down to reading, you'll have plenty of chapters as you follow the protagonist.Still, I don't recommend this.The characters are typical of what you'd expect from a horny **** writing a dual cultivation novel, and there isn't exactly a world built.Don't read this, save your eyes!
This is indeed a good story! It got a good plot and good smut! Such a gem! I never expected this novel to be good! I think the characters are good and I can't pin point Wharton this novel but you can really tell that it got a weight on it (?) it snot just a pure smutty novel with a slapped plot here and there! Truly an interesting one!
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So far this books is of amazing quality. it's interesting and unique in a way, while keeping your attention with every passing chapter. overall it is one of the few books worth a second read or maybe even a third when it gets higher in chapters which is it's only weak point, the update schedule is a little slow. This is of course counteracted by the great chapters with great length, but overall its current read time is less than 2 hours. still good one, author 10/10