Hello, all~This is my first werewolf novel tells you about rejections, forbidden mate, hybrid, weak to strong, and all.Hope you guys love it. Ciao?
Easy to read, original ( to me ). I like that in the beginning the FL comes across as weak and timid, which to an extent she is (more modest and shy), but also turns out to have strong points such as staying calm in stress situation and quick thinking. She turns out to be strong a lot of the time when overcoming initial fear without suddenly showcasing superhero qualities. Also pretty decent length of chapters and pricing ( in comparison )
I’ve caught up with the current chapters, and here’s my take.The MC is undeniably a villain, though in the early chapters, it doesn’t feel that way. At first, he genuinely wanted to save Daehyun and Aliyah, but once he realized they were no longer useful, he ultimately chose to kill Daehyun instead. After Volume 1, his morality becomes more questionable as he starts treating everyone like pawns. That said, up until Chapter 30, aside from killing Daehyun, his actions haven’t been as bad as I initially expected.I did understimated the plot, I thought it would be just another academy plot thing. For example, why does Elijah’s body look exactly like Gaia’s? Why is Calliope undetected by the system? And also with the hints that there will be outer God planning to invade the Earth. There seems to be some bible kind of plot going on here, which honestly the author did good on fitting the story line.So far, every chapter has felt fresh and not repetitive, which I truly appreciate. I hope the progression maintains this pace because the story gets more compelling the further you read.
As far as I've read, this is interesting! Rhett, I think he's super cute. I'm giving you a thumbs up, KING. Highly recommend, maybe I'll continue reading it later.
What to say author its good, too good whole day I wait for the new chapter like a diehard fan. everyone please give this novel a read its good
Gonna be peak novel fr ................
nice story work and script for the book when I read
Love it so far.I wish the author would update it daily but I'm satisfied with the current update schedule.
I love your writing style. Your words are very creative and well-crafted with the way you use them. I truly love the suspense and thrill you get as you read, which has me hooked. Each chapter has its own pace and more details unfold as you read along.
The synopsis got me excited and character are good too. Good work author?
Saddly I have to rate this novel low.There are jus 2 things that are wrong:1st. Author should put yuri/girls love in tags as he gain readers that does not now about it, like me. Yuri is just not my cup of tea.2nd. And more important.Autor has no idea what dominatrix means, probably not even bdsm is. Here I don't see any power exchange (maybe in case of 1 girl who is a masochist) only abuse. I am not sure if Autor did good research about this or even any. Not everything on the Internet is true. I've read this story till ch 60+ and what I found is brainwashing, abuse slave trading and training, more abuse and what rly pissed me of what torture...What is the most important in domination relationship is willingly giving someone power over him/herself. Here she just takes is for herself. So what I recomd doing if I were in Autor place:1. Delete story (this is extreme so don't do it unless the story is beyond saving which is not true)2. Change title as main character is not dominatrix but slave trainer probably with daddy issue looking how she treat males (abuse/sissification).3 edit story after doing research about proper bdsm relationships not only about pain and humiliation.I would choose 3rd option as it would enrich your knowlage for your future works. So Autor Cheer up and start studying. You can't just write what you want without knowing what you write.Woow it was rly long.
The story is good enough that the during and eyes word are barely noticable. Here's hoping the author will add chapters quickly.