LuffyForTheWin
If you can get past a whiney idiot constantly complaing then this is a story for you. mc changes bodies with”mc” then TreAts his adopted mom like his real mom. Constantly whining about her trying to screw him. He didnt even know her 2 months before but now he acts like she was his real mom that raised him. So much dumb and very little cultural stuff
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The language reads easy. The author describes every thing well, almost as if it's happening in front of your own eyes. If I have one suggestion - to divide up paragraphs more, as any thing longer than four sentences fills up a entire screen on mobile. Well done Author. Try the story, it's great.
It’s an interesting concept however the MC gets annoying at times. Moments where all he had to do was speak up to clear a misunderstanding he didn’t, I don’t know if it was an attempt at humour but it gets tiring after the first. Also similar to what another reviewer said, forge apprentices are basically slaves but for some reason because of the MC they allow them to compete with other nations for important territory changing decisions (up to ch 122 so far). Like… what?
There is nothing "lowkey" about this Mc. its your typical Sign-in novel mc wants to become strong>meets girl>trains girl>pokes his nose into everything that revolves around her. its not lowkey its more of a Wannabe lowkey mc
I really enjoyed the first 39 chapters, I hope it gets picked up.jfoejdjdioenedidkwooddjkdpddikdk2o3irjcd9jdiri3meforneooefjidkirjdjd
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the story goes too fast for my taste, like the MC who kisses his ex-girlfriend as soon as they meet (not enough development of their relationship in the new timeline). Not enough explanation on the length of time that the MC play from the beginning, to be able to have a point of reference. But the theme of the story I love it since they look like legendary mechanic but from the point of view of a player. In addition you added a difficulty mode which is new in my opinion or if it does not succeed their account is deleted.
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Both book by the authors has a good premise, but have been so poorly executed you want to puke. It really is a shame for a good idea.MC is retarded, but the world is much more retarded to highlight his amazingness.Early is not so bad. As you usually cant expect much deep plot in webnovel.But in ch. 30 ish.He log into the game which require him to be unconscious in a possible enemy's car. For no fking urgency whatsoever. He went that far just to show how retarded he is to the reader.dropped.Translator did a good work though. But its better to pick another title.
amazing plot at first and it gradually gets even better each chapter. its definitely easy to read and captivating which make the readers succumb to the story. nontheless, the story is approachable to all kind of ppl who seeking a good book to read! All the characters are interesting and lovable! overall recommend it to readers out there!
It's so convincing to read this, mostly in our generation some of us related to this story. Because in our highschool life we met the person that give us inspiration to go to school everyday some of them our new friends maybe our crush hahaha then sometimes our encourager teacher that they give knowledge and inspirational teach, So because of this story. It's gives me throwback in my highschool days✨??
