Even if the magic concept of this story is good, the author does not have a good grasp of his story. Details are explained after the fact. A timeline constructed before writing would help the author to have a better grasp of his narration
Best story ever.It's about a man who want to laze around and lose his purity after being reincarnated.A true good story unlike 70% of those on webnovel
Absolutely love the story in general really like the main character for a few reasons 1 he is clearly overpowered and it is just accepted i normally really hate when authors desperately try to make it seem like there character isn’t that strong while they clearly are2 a main character in a vrmmorpg that isn’t a human without being a special ultra exclusive race is very refreshing and somehow makes it more realistic Than about the world and charactersI first of all really like the perspective of the development team on what the main character does (cry alot)i had gotten sick and tired of stories where the games creator seemed to either be nonexistent or with no complaints send out 10s of updates a week because the main character keeps triggering expansion packsAnd somehow while seeming realistic the author is still able to make them seem mysterious who exactly is the genius who set up the company are the “NPCs” really just npcs or are they sentient A.I, Aliens, gods who knows.If there is one part i need to give criticism on then its the coloring of in game things i can still barely accept the item rarity but making Hp blue while stamina green is on step to far also why is it called stamina when its also used for magic shouldn’t it then just be called energy? Oh and how much a stat actually does is also kinda vague in the beginning gaining one or two points seemed to strengthen him alot but its kinda vague how much now with a few 10s of stat points he seems pretty dam strong so what about few hundredths of stat points who knows as i have no clue how much one point has as effect So overall in only the first 50 chapters it has been a story that successfully created a world introduced an intriguing character a mystery to solve and some memorable moments I believe this is and will continue to be an interesting and exciting story and cant wait to read more
Good story.................Very excited to read more..............Good luck author and I hope you finish the story............................................................................................................................
Top-tier.
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It starts off good, but as the story progresses it becomes a *** fantasy rather than kingdom building and politics it was supposed to be. Like there are more than 3 chaps in a row, dedicated entirely to ***, but having more than one chapter simply to give more description of the MC-s territory seems to be too much of a task. It gives that Japanese virgin eroge novel/manga vibes that I don't like at all.
Its really rare to find good stuff in between the 95% of trash on this site, so im happy to proclaim this Novel a gem in the making. Sadly only 14 Chapters are out so far ... but hey, keep up the great work Author!