It is an interesting and enjoyable novel to read, the MC isn't directly the lead of the story instead he takes a more god-like approach of quietly observing the family he had initially chosen when he had just awoken to grow his power and influence.
I like the concept of having something like rewind. The writer is experienced and has kept his other novel ongoing. It's still too early to know everything about the story and how he will develop it. But I love it and will update my review. He has got my attention, now I will have to see, for how long...
It is always wonderful to meet new writers with great skill. I liked the accurate description of the place, which made you imagine it well. Keep it up, man
guys I don't have a schedule for updating but I can assure you that in one week this novel will get at least 2 chapters...5 if i can.
This is a very good novel. I have written it based on many experiences of my life. Please give me your support.
Very well written please keep it up author looking forward to more chapters ?
YESS!!! NEW UPDATE!!! THANK YOU AUTHOR! ( T ~T)
The concept is good. The story is simple and straightforward almost like a children’s fairytale. Now for the not so good bit:The MC has the IQ of a doorknob and constantly whines besides getting everything anyone could ever wish for in the given setting. This bit gets repetitive and way too annoying. Most of the MC’s vocabulary consists of the phrase “huh?!”. The fights are ridiculous. A dozen apprentice level kids holding off a demon army while most of them are in a one on one situation while the mc ponders over moves and goes “huh?!” every time he sees anthing move.The grammar is atrocious. This needs an editor.
love reading thisiIhope there are more like this
dear author -nim I fu*k love this novel so please update quickly
This is a review for an FO. I like your story cover
There’s no question ten out of ten story it’s background update stability writing everything’s perfect but I would like to get chapters faster