Author kidnapped my entire blood line and said he would never let them see the light of day again if I didn't leave a 5 star review ???Other than the threats every other chapter great story and the character development is great the protagonist is not some brain dead guy and actully remembers his abilities ??and he actual develops meaningful connections with the female leads (impossible??) one of my favorite reincarnation novels ???
I'd say that the pacing is too slow and everything is very unnecessarily detailed. But as it is a fantasy novel it's a good trait. I would say I would like to give the novel a chance and see how the story goes.
It's amazing,it has great writing and great pace.
This is a very nice book, it is very well written, my recommendation, it is a must read.
You should give this a try, hidden gem and love the story. Although I haven't caught up to latest chapter, I'll continue when more piles up. Can't wait to see what he cooks.
This was an excellent short story. It had lots of plot and good character development. I loved the twists and turns in the story.
From what I can see its a pretty good start, a lot of good action going on and characters that challenge the main making the small cast reasonable by far. I can't wait for more updates!
This novel is... Not great. The grammar Is so painfully bad that I can’t actually read anymore. Mistakes here and there are fine, but literally every sentence takes me out of it. Please if you write a book at least use grammarly or something. Also the writing has been... bad. Often times the author skips foreshadowing and straight up says “something is going to happen” before it happens and without foreshadowing. Its absolutely frustrating.
Many people just give five star.When 3 is for average, 4 is for good, 5 is for masterpiece quality.Most of them not write review seriously.
The digging and creation of storage spaces in resulted in quite a few decent sized tunnels. With a little more concentration, pack that surrounding earth, reinforce those those walls aaaaaaaaand there we go, official hallways for all the wormies
*If it wasn't for my quick-witted personality my head would be rolling by now. Who knows that senior can also hide his strength and his beast companion is by no means weaker i can't see their cultivation....black flames...bla- Nirvana!!! It cant be!!*
"You've come up with some pretty impressive inventions, Tony. War isn't one of them."