I so much love this book,I just hope you'll be posting regularly ,you have my full support ❤️
Pretty good start. Could use a bit of editing for smoother transitions. The story moves pretty quickly and I feel like I’m missing some background information on the characters. It could be brought in later chapters to make the story more well rounded. Other than that, keep up the good work author. This story has a lot of potential.
where'd it go are you ever planning to return
I read the description, and the premise seems pretty interesting. I will give it a try, thank you! ?
Everything is perfect—from the cover to the chapters. It's truly awesome! I really loved your writing style; the chapters are incredible. Each one draws me in deeper, making it hard to put the book down. Your ability to develop characters and weave intricate plots is impressive. I appreciate the attention to detail and the way you build suspense throughout the narrative.The pacing is just right, keeping the reader engaged without feeling rushed. I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you for sharing such a fantastic piece of work.
an interesting story line and awesome world
The main character seems to be an interesting guy from the first chapter
So far this story is great. I want to keep reading!
Just for FP..............................
I connects strongly with this book. The strong emotional undertones can not be missed. Thank you writer.
this is not a shameless review, this is a genuine author review at Chapter 75. but I'm still shameless, you'll find out if you read.That said, what should you expect from this book?what are the pros and cons?mc hates humans, the hate will grow as time goes on. He's not your normal hero... Have that in mind.the beginning of the book is terribly slow paced.... Humor was used to replace the action.unstable character of the mc, it's a shift, that is because. MC lost his touch with humans and his trying to cooperate with them, spends more time in his mind.Side characters don't have much depths, i'on even know hoe myself, don't ask me, I tried. I just saw it that way..... It changes along the way.Let's just say, I'm not the best at writing peak stories.The story just gets better as you read. Besides, it's my first good book.All I can say Is, my current readers are just patient, and sure they'll get a huge chunk of the meat and bone!If you feel like your're patient enough to join them, fine you can test you patience, but it all depends on you.I'm just grateful I have good readers despite how bad I am at this...Thank you for reading this far!
I just caught up right now with the first 8 chpaters, and I must say that I'm rather impressed by it. It's quite slow at first, but i believe that is a necessary sacrifice. The author is trying to build a compelling world, and i must say that he's succeeding. It is not a masterpiece by no meams but it's great for what it is, especially for a first novel at that. I'm anticipant about this and the authors future works in general. I believe he or she has a lot of dormant potential that will fruit as he or she writes more and more novels and conversely chapters.