The darkness ahead lit by Loki had shown we had come to a dead end. A massive crater with a deep pit in front of us where the sewer had seemed to exploded.
"Mr. Deux this is all the lecture materials, is it okay for you to take the tour with me now?" I said as I handed him all the papers and notes regarding our topics.
He has given a good outline but he should give his charater info more let's see what will happen next but I will suggest you to read it once
Maze: The Endless Quest" is a really great book! It hooked me from the beginning and the story kept me engaged. The world-building is impressive and the plot twists are unpredictable. If you enjoy adventure and fantasy, I would definitely recommend checking this book out!
The novel at the beginning was alright, you could see the basic premises of where the story will go but around the end of volume 1 it got.... boring. The multiple povs and showing the future is what dissapointed me the most, idc bout your crappy english im reading the story to see how far the protagonist will go and not the future of the protagonist. Honestly I thought Earth 2 would have the same structure as Earth Prime but it didnt. Now theres heros wtf? Lord Shadow became a hero? When he first arrived at Earth 2 and destoyed the meterorite he was called the Dark Knight but then in like 2 chapters hes called by a ****ty name and now theres a rich guy using his blood to create super soldiers. *Sigh* The beginning was good it wasnt great but I held on because I thought this novel was different. I was right. It became boring.P.S - (This is just me rambaling on but yeah) Dont use caps when the system is showing something, its hard to read, use brackets it shows that you at least care but how much you present yourself. Also whats with showing all his skills, pillars and items at once (dont know cause I always skiped it when he showed the status) it looks stupid, use sections and sub sections. Have you not read video game novels? The author shows great care in there work by putting brackets in when the system is doing something. I mean why would you use caps when the system is talking, its hard to read as well as the fact that its ugly. Have you never proof read your work?
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For someone without writing experience you did great. Am able to understand everything. Leon's life is quite sad and I wonder what will happen to him in the future??....am really curious ?
i like the story but i don't like female lead she is too naive..............................................................................
A very good read, this has a very good and well thought world background and plot. Even though there are some grammatical mistakes author seems to be improving. Currently loving this work hope it continues stably. Thanks for the author for your hard work. ??
This novel had a lot of potential when it started out. Unfortunately the author seems to have gotten bored early in and do the concept fell into random chapters of disconnected story arcs for no apparent reason. Left one with a feeling of the whole thing being extremely forced. Lacks proper planning and development needed to hold an audience.
this book is the best on this up no cap read this bro right now I thought he was a nobody until now my boy Hahito showing his true colours ³
this book is great it's a fairly quick read but the characters are rich and Interesting with just a drop of romance just enough to say it's there with out affecting the story