Chaps are clumped together
Something happened at chapter 33. Every sentence stopped making sense
Pretty good concept. When you follow the MC in his fights and cultivation, detective work, sect building and travelling it's a pretty nice novel.
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However I've read about 1k chapters at this point and I truly want to end myself. Imagine a normal Chinese novel with ridiculously long descriptions about abilities that make no sense (even for enemies that only appear in that chapter and are irrelevant forever after), imagine that the abilities described which take entire chapters, are basically the same every time. What I mean by this is that the first ability is perhaps "fireball" and then the next ability is "fireball that burns through the void" and it continues to ramp up but the descriptions which are entire chapters long are basically the same thing repeated every f*ck*ng time. NOW IMAGINE THAT INSTEAD OF THERE ONLY BEING 1 MC THAT THIS HAPPENS WITH, THERE IS 1 MC (master/sect leader) AND THEN 4-8 DISCIPLES AND THEY ALL HAVE TO INCREASE THEIR ABILITIES/CULTIVATION AT THE SAME TIME
this brings a smile to my face
This is peak
Interesting novel! Definitely worth the read. The only problem is that the chapter is too little and the update seem to discontinued.
Wtf? He's a mage, and could just go to the library to learn a few more skill, but no. He only has two skill and he's already going to fight for money to buy recovery potions? Can't he just Learn a few more skills first?.
Chinaaaaaa...
I haven't finished reading but I am love/hooked already just by the first few chapters .. the writing quality is topnotch and I love the author's use of words and the FL's perspective with seems relatable . I will keep reading ,best wishes author
I do not seek to offend or insult anyone, it is my point of view.The novel has an interesting concept and premise.As for the rest:The mc feels stupid and meaningless, he trusts and falls in love EXTREMELY fast (in a matter of 1 paragraph or 1 chapter- I meet) just like the MC's girls, the romance is close to 0.There is no clear world development.The power system is totally unbalanced and with many inconsistencies and no senses.The mc's plot armor is at unnatural levels, equaling or even surpassing goku from DBZ or issei from DxD.In summary:A novel that could have had great potential, wasted by a lousy development.
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Author did a good job on this one, a very detailed and vivid imagination penned down. Though I was hoping for an introduction at the beginning, but anyways thumbs up.