Look, I sacrificed and read everything (64 ch's), I don't know why the author dragged such a bad start, he wanted to show a character evolution while increasing the mc's strength, but it took a long time and I bet that's why he lost so many readers , it was a good read, I don't lie, I liked what happened from chapter 45 on, it was torture to read before that, but it was good even after the fight with the noble devil , it has potential, but you need to prepare to read in 40 very frustrating chapters, until this chapter the mc will be weak, fearful, perverted, cowardly... so far it was the worst mc I've ever seen, but in chapter 40, something happens to him that changes everything, besides changing his personality, he gets stronger and more confident, in addition to correcting some of his flaws, he doesn't become the best mc's, but he's readable.The story is good, after chapter 40 it gets very interesting, if you wait until then, you'll like it. Writing Quality: 5.0 (I don't complain about this, I didn't find any errors)Update stability: 5.0 (I don't follow since the beginning, but since I started every day new chapters have been posted)Story development: 5.0 (the story is great, it has everything to last a hundred chapters, but the MC development is depressing and frustrating because it takes so long)Character designs: 1.0 (only 4 things are quoted from the characters: whether he's handsome or not, apparent age, hair color and whether he's fat or thin, it's kind of hard to imagine the characters with these descriptions where they don't even talk about details , not even for the main characters)World Background: 2.0 (difficult to assess, almost nothing has been presented yet)PS; But the next arc has a lot of potential, I confess that I'm a little excited about it, so I can increase my score more, remembering that the soap opera is at the beginning, there's a lot to happen, I'm not offending this comment, but I give my honest opinions about romance.
i will have to rate this book 5 stars coz this is truly a banger
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Honestly, this novel is amazing. It feels more like a philosophical book, reminiscent of Voltaire. It’s very well written, though the transitions between chapters are abrupt, but it’s still interesting. This is for those who want to read something new, not something ordinary. I recommend it to everyone. I’ve read 15 chapters so far, and I really like it.
It's an alright book, however, I simply cannot stand the mc so yeah. This is important for any book obviously. The mc basically has the intelligence of a brick. He is dumb af. When reading books I like the mc to at least have a spec of intelligence to them when reading. It helps with the immersion of the book when reading. Like, the tipping point for me was when he met Connor, was it? It was just overall an sht show. It was so random to the point of stupidity. He was fighting in the wave of monsters, he saves him. All good, but then he lets him join his party leaving out the fact he is like 11 levels ahead of him. The mc shows him is an ultra-secret class he could get killed for. Let's this random dude follow him around and in his home. The uses his secret ability right in front of him because he "forgot" about him. Then decides to give basically all his secrets away to him. All to a RANDOM ass dude, we know nothing about. It's a joke tbh.... Too painful to carry on for me, but if you can stand this sort of interaction you may like the story. He is op af just needs time to grow. Not many descriptions either so yeah.
This novel is great! It’s engaging, with a well-structured plot and a pace that keeps you interested. The development is steady, and each chapter offers just the right amount of intrigue. Definitely worth checking out if you want to read a story without the usual clichés of reincarnated protagonists!Well done, author—keep going! ?✨
its too good .just love with these writing skills .big fan of your story .
Chapter 80. The story consists of the mc getting items and selling them,turning monsters into shadows,talking ant the cat and how greats it is for making mc lucky but it actually doing nothing besides saving mc against sunless, and mc paying doe the princesses room and getting punked by her. Don’t forget for some reason after almost 100 chapters mc is not even level 10 ❤️➗2️⃣
Great story. Nice characters. Interesting world background. The development of the story is great. It's a one of a kind story which doesn't match with others of the same genre. I liked the story a lot. I hope the author keeps updating the novel.
Come from good novel... I'm glad that you have a new novel to publish...this one got potentials... looking forward for the xx scene ?
nice book...............................
It was an alright read. The story had some interesting parts, and the characters were decent. The pacing was fine and picked up as the revenge plot kicked in. I'm hoping for more kingdom-building elements in the future; personal strength is great, but I'd like to see more focus on his subordinates too