this is good I want moreeee update chapters
I haven't encountered this type of genre before, my first time seeing a monster with system. It's looking like a Simulation kind of novel and it's nice and cool.
I hate authors who drop their novels like this
That's so amazing to be honest, at first I tought it would just be a random harem book, but it was not just another one of these. The story is interesting, and it got some laughs from me, hope the author doesn't drop...
The premise of the story is interesting. A young prince of a particularly unfair kingdom is found to not have any magical abilities and is exiled. When all seems lost, he is transformed into an angelic species, a nephilim, and gets to prepare his revenge into the rival country.The story is however not particularly well written, and it’s not just because of the recurrent typos (which seem to often be caused by an autocorrector). It is frequent for the author to make long redundant descriptions when the point was already well conveyed in one paragraph. The character is often justifying his actions over and over when his motives were already sufficiently obvious given what we knew of him. Sometimes the author repeats what he just said, as if he never reread himself or has unfinished sentences. In short, the story suffers from a lack of editing, proofreading.
It's a decent read, but I got pulled out of the story a lot by the world, supposed to be a military school but there is zero discipline and pretty much the entire story plays out like "Lord of the Flys" with older kids/stronger kids deciding on the rules and punishments. All this is justified by this apparently making the weak kids want to get stronger so they sell themselves to the military to get resources, which in this world the global military that is fighting an technologically superior race, thinks that's how their going to win by holding power and privilege to a few people instead of you know, what a military actually values like discipline and team work. So anyway I quit at chapter 50, but if your looking for "slowish build vampire Lord of the flies high school". **. It's really not that bad, just fell short in a few too many places for me to continue.
Hey readers, this is the Author but you probably already knew that from the 'Author' tag in front of my name.This review is to give you a quick and fairly important rundown of my novel and not just as an excuse to rate myself 5 stars *wink*, so here goes...The MC, Hal, is a little irrational at the beginning but please blame this on the fact that he is in a new environment and believes he is trying to get a feel of the 'place'...so to speak.Also in the beginning, (Spoiler alert!) he tends to unlock new abilities just in time to save his life from stupid situations he put himself in (This is only in the first twenty chapters. more or less). This is my fault and I did not realise that it was recurring until a reader brought it to my attention.-All this faults are only really in the first few chapters and if you can please stick with it. it does get better and you might actually like them (the early chapters) as well.They are quite interesting If you like or can overlook those minor details. I was still new at the time but I am way better now.so please, .give my novel a try and be a tad bit nice in your comments and reviews. XD.-*Phew*Now that I've got that off my chest, I invite you to read and Enjoy this novel of mine.-(Spoiler Alert) It's awesome.
This is truly a masterpiece. The worldbuilding is absolutely great. The main character is unlike the other cliche characters, who are always indecisive and need some kind of tragic event to start cultivating. He does what he wishes to while still maintaining his moral valuesThe story has a very steady development. Neither too slow nor too fast. While the writing quality needs a bit of work, I truly think this is a story worth one's time to read.
Eh.Sorcerer's Journey - dropped.This week World's Best Martial Artist - dropped.These were my two main novels and they were pretty solid compared to other ****.A lot of good trial novels - never picked up.They pick up trash like this. This novel is crap and you already have better upgrades of it like Library. F***
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So few novels ever appreciate the boy child. Most authors write the MC having a daughter because girls are more likely to gain the readers's favors, so good work.
Pretty good!The protagonist's goal is to run the best restaurant in the world. His power curve seems kind of wack, but I'm along for the ride.The references make more sense if you've read the Shokugeki no Souma and Toriko manga.