Already hooked!, Dear author you just gained a reader,This is Wonderful!?
good work. there is lack of LotM fanfics on this platform. hope you don't drop ... a suggestion of mine would be to post this fanfic in the fanfiction section instead of novels section to increase the readership. fanfics in the novels section rarely get any attention
I can't get enough of this book, it's so good!!??❤️ officially OBSESSED!!?? You've gotten yourself a new fan. Please keep up the good work ?❤️
SUPERB LOVE IT. IN SHORT I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR THIS STUFF. THIS IS ONE THE BEST EVER TO READ WHEN IT COMES TO MALE LEAD STORIES .PLEASE IF YOU ARE IN LOVE WITH MAFIA THRILLER TYCOON STORIES CHECK THIS ONE OUT I PROMISE YOU YOU WILL LOVE IT. IN SHORT YOU WILL COME TO THANK ME LATER. I PLEASE THE AUTHOR HAS MADE THIS STORY PART OF WEB NOVEL WSA 2024. SO LOVE THIS STORY THEN SUPPORT IN ANY WAY POSSIBLE SO YOU CAN HELP THE AUTHOR TO WIN IT. MY APPRECIATION.
Im on chapter 181 and I have to say that this book is really good but there r some things I find complete bullshit.... Like how the MC has his girlfriend/wife they seem never to be abke to stay together for a long time all because of some bullshit and then there is her status and on top of that people from her mothers side of the family just pop up out of nowhere and must take her back... for what reason?? The MC dosent ask any questions and on top of that these people never came to see her or come for her before and ontop of that her mother was supposed to be dead do y r they popping up now and saying she is alive??? If that was the case then the mother should have tried to get in contact qith hwr sooner and she should have come herself to see her daughter.... so for all of this to play out the way if is... its all bullshit for me and makes this book suck!! And the MC has "trust issues" so y the hell is he just going to let them go woth his "wife" and only one person as a gard??? he should be going himself and if he doesnt go he should be sending a hole team and that they will not leave her side and if she doesnt return her will destroy thw hole island of Japan... I mean the MC is doing something again that he normally wouldnt do!!! Its bullshit to break character like this and this isnt the first time this has happened in this book!!!
Overall it being your first work is understandable.The Little bits of Information before the start of the chapter was Good touch as it allowed us readers to understand it a little bit.But the chapter seemed to be a little bit to short and overall the tone was a bit rushed and just the atmosphere was little different with the characters reactions being bit bland and not expressed to well, but overall it decent for a new author, Welcome to World of Web-Novels!
I haven't started but I'm hope for best as the snip had me screaming joy but I prefer the story itself give the sweets. I hoped for it to have had 100 chapters already because I wasn't in to male MC...and I'm bored of the same story lines...
"So Writerz did you--"
"Welcome back hyung" said RM setting in the sofa while holding his pen and paper.
Dia memakai mahkota laurel di kepala.
Great story please keep writing
Ultron chuckled to himself.