Levyne0629
Yeow author here! Just wanted to rate my novel.This is actually my second novel, but I messed up the first one so I pretty much have written this just to get experience in writing. So yeah, I have pretty much taken the concept of RI (actually I stole it :>) because I like it so you can be mad at me however you like later on. I'll try to see how this will go since I butchered the power system of my first work making my work a mess so I tried writing this instead to see if I can improve my skills.If you are wondering what I felt about my work, I actually feel like I have committed an unforgivable sin for creating this abomination so I'll give this 3 stars first and change it later when I felt confident about it. I can't guarantee anything with my work other than the stability of updates since I am way ahead of the current chapters, so if you just want to spend your time since you have already run out of novels to read then I suggest reading this trash story of mine!That's all! Peace out!
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As of now I think this novel could reach far. The way his cheat works is interesting and at the same time not easy to trigger. ( In the sense that he needs to work hard for it) There are limitations to it and could make future plots interesting as long as the author isn't dumb. In total I'd say it's worth a read and should be picked this week.
Wow! I am not the one to love this kind of genre but still, this one got me. It's really interesting, cool, and well written. From the synopsis to the chapters, everything is beautifully done.
Hi all, this e-book is very nice and interesting to read, fantastic explanation of pandemic and nowadays reality, good comparision, keep it up dear.
There is a lot of cliche in that novel, that cliche we all love. A boy is unable to cultivate due to somebody problem, a master that reforges his body to allow cultivating, and a dedicated MC.What else do you want more? Just go and read.The only problem I found in this novel is that it had too many long paragraphs, maybe it's just my eyes but I would like to see some breaks to make things easier.
Amazing. I've seen a review for this on yt and fell in love with this story
At chapter 55This is a really creative fan fiction that occurs in an anime world and doesn't make me cringe at forcing the character to interact with most of the main characters in Naruto. For someone like me who likes the growth from weak to strong, this is gold as it is well-paced and has good story development. I was gutted when the Author took his break but good thing he saw the light and the will of fire made him continue with this novel
I like this. Never read something like this before but it was really interesting when I started. Hope the next chapters will upload fast! Keep up the good work!
Great storyline and characters. The story is easy to understand and follow and I haven’t gotten bored of it in the slightest. Definitely recommend to friends or whoever is reading this.
Premise is nice. Quite similar to Great Doctor Ling Ran but the MC has been a doctor for 10 years, iirc, at this point. The fact that he has been a doctor for so long has basically no effect on the whole story, other than times where he quotes his "immense medical experience" when he needs to think of an excuse when using the system.Speaking of the system, it basically fades out into the background and becomes a glorified scanner and surgery streaming machine later into story. Even the streaming plot point is mostly to show the readers that the MC is, indeed, a master surgeon by making the stream viewers stare and awe at the MC's supreme godly skill. Plot progression is basically non-existent. 500 chapters in and only now is the MC starting to move up into a bigger stage. There is too much filler chapters that has mostly no impact on the overall story.The translation quality takes a dive around 300 chapters in. It starts to feel like its MTL as the pretty boy side character starts being referred to as a "she" and mob characters' titles start changing around all the time, becoming Director, CEO, President, Doctor, Teacher and such. At around page 500 it becomes basically unreadable.
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
