Good novel but the ending is atrocious
Good story, ending is uhh, don't know what to say about it.
I've already read MDZS and SVSSS and I really like it, hope I like it too
What God of slaughter?. More like God of Simping.
Ngl, the Novel is great like really good. The only problem is that, the Author made it a joke with the comedy, like here is some example :-
The MC beat the sh*t out of a trash female character brutally by using his shadow power secret chamber
The brother of that female character which also hates her asks " Did you make my sister lose her virginity?
And then it's revealed that the female character is a weirdo who has a thing to be beaten to the pulp ( that's why the brother made assumption)
keep reading
But honestly, I'm loving it so far. About ten chapter in!!
I would love to read your books but from how many times u have dropped the others I’m not ready to go through it again, maybe when it gets to about 300 I’ll come back
It would be good if the Grammer and writing style weren't so awful.
i m not good at writing review so just my honest take on the novel so far.
-pace is good most of the time but sometime quite slow
-i don know about others but i really like if you give more detail out for the character. just my opinion on this one
-i believe when theres a great battle about to happen you could just delay some of the chapter and then boom mass release so we could feel the fight more closely
-thats all, for me this novel is good
Disclaimer: I am writing this review considering that this is the author's first novel. Like some other fans, I was also paid by the author to write a good review(just kidding?)...
1. Writing quality:- So, considering this is the author's first novel, the writing quality is good. After catching on to the recent chapters I can conclude that the author is not good at describing the characters, but he is showing major improvements from the 1st chapter.
2. Story Development:- The way the author executed his ideas was amazing since this whole 'Getting Isekaid in a novel/game I read/played' is a recent uprising cliche, the author did a great job of adding extra elements to make this interesting. This was also the first time I read a 13-chapter prologue.
3. Character Design:- Unlike others, this author is focused more on chapter design than world-building which is welcomed change. The fact that the author put effort into writing a 13-chapter prologue gives depth to the mc. He did a great job in making the mc relatable and many others(including me) found the mc quite similar to us despite his messed-up past. He feels more real, his love for his family, and his struggles all feel real.
Update Stability:- The author is very much consistent, you can expect 1 or 2 chapters per day.
World background:- There is not much to say as the prologue was focused completely on the main character, and he just recently got transported to the novel world. In a second review(if this book crossed 150 chapters), I will write a detailed review of the world background.
My personal opinion:- This book and its author both have tons of potential to be tapped into. If you are like me who loves watching an author improve as each chapter passes by then you will love this.
A quote I like very much from this book:-
"If you can't find someone you can trust, then look for someone you can control."
As per our agreement, you gibe me moneh I gibe you a 5-star review. So you better appreciate me author??. (First time I wrote a review of 2k words)
a solid 5 stars for this book, got me tearing up in less than 5 chapters in, absolutely beautiful how you portray the emotions of the characters,giving them depth as if they were not characters in a book but actual humans, will be writing a subsequent review as the novel progresses