Aow...aiya..m crying..but y isn't she vit their father rather than Ji Buwang..Aow..I kind of want the father n n their family to b together vit Mu Jingzhe
you have a decent start here i truly enjoy the way hes a happy person with dark magic
I’m doing it again so other can read it
Hello, there, author. As promised, I'll give you brutally honest review.
As I've said in the other day, you need to fix how you write the dialogue but I see no improvement.
I mean, why you do you use "<" and ">" to separate the dialogues and paragraphs instead of ("Blas bla, bla.).
Your story is good, but ruined by your ignorance to learn the proper writing techniques.
good luck.
I really love your story but I wonder why you stopped updating. Who offended you?
the author doesn't know how to portray the character and is very naive.
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This is a very good novel, the story is really addictive and the plot is well described. It's easy to imagine the scenes. I highly recommend it
So there aren't that much chapter yet but What I read it is amazing! I really love the plotline and hope that it continuous the in upcoming chapter .It's definitely worth reading.
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I like the concept of the story. And it has potential. But when the 'damsel in distress' scenario happens in chapter 4 itself, it's so disappointing. And the way the MC speaks to other women just irks me.What I'm saying is, HAREM is fine. But it should be done tastefully otherwise just don't do it. When you bring a woman this soon into the story, it just ruins the future plot.Another novel with potential got ruined.
Waste of time, MC is cowardly, selfish, pathetic and hateful. Why anyone would think people would want to read about a PoS MC like that is incomprehensible.