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You get a protagonist who have absorbed a part of a celestial and replicated the time stone get fucking captured by fury on purpose. Pathetic
exact similar with astral pet store only different names and different chapter order you need some diferrences man not just names an arc that astral pet store haven't done or something
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This needs an editor. The constant POV switches make it hard to follow the story. Also, the MC feels a bit fake, idk, maybe I should just give this more time.
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I dont want to nitpick to much but the fact the the children speak so eloquently and can semmingly articulate everything well at that age is a little off putting. An example would be the teacher not blinking an eye at a 5 year old saying standardized or being able to introduce themselves professionally.Otherwise great.
Fascinating Story. better then most books i have read so far. I want more chapters. keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!