No sure aboit it , it's the opposite or not? but I tend to want to read more chapters and somehow I don't focus enough or something, maybe I'm getting old, jjj
I dont know why you people like this so much. I have read so many fantasy novels like this that it made me very critical about fantasy novels. First of all, the idea of a broke mercenary with complete limbs and a probable average strength being broke is utterly idiotic. I wouldve understood him being broke if he had lost his limbs or anything or if he lost his strength maybe but this? Hayzz. The story is very bland so much so that this is the same pattern on fantasy novels before with no "Boom" or "Wow" effect on the readers. The depiction of cruelty is quite nice but the others are very much, well, nothing. I feel like the author had no experience reading other fantasy novels that he had no clue what was in it.
Thanks for your eye opening comment. I wont start it.
it's really annoying when the mc's thoughts and the mc's statements both use the " " because you only realize too late that they are thoughts instead of statements. that means if his thoughts occur between conversations it completely destroys the mood and flow. it's better just when it go for
statements= " "
thoughts = ' '
Yep p*rn gives you memory loss
Guy is a simp and a beta
not bad, interesting world and mc.I liked that magic was more fact based, eg to be a healer you need medical knowledge.side characters personas were annoying to the point it was a drag to read sometimes.ending was obvious, both parts.ok read.
Yuht… pretty good. Keep it up. Got pote ntial
I really liked your fanfiction, please continue it, apparently there will be other alien races so will only original alien races appear or will alien races from other universes appear like thanagarians, skrulls, viltrumites, etc?
best story ever please write more ignore the haters please
the synopsis was really intriguing I want to know more
I don't know why this novel isn't famous as many other famous novels but for sure it is one of the best I have read. Cheers to the author ?Keep posting the novel i will continue reading it....