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"Only the victor will achieve the destiny."
The next morning at 0730 HRS, 10th August 2018.
"What'll happen if she…stayed like this, forever?" (Captain Nassah)
The best story of this genre that I have read. A pity that more chapters havent been tanslated. But im staying on board for the rest of the ride.
good.....................................
Yoo, So I will review this novel before the author even does a freaking reviews, It seems to be good and very well foundationally. Excited to see where it goes from here. Do read it if you reading my review
The first four chapters are beautiful I hope you continue it
It's one of the better novel available in Web Novel.Give it a try, I am sure you will like it.
I am now past the 100 chapter mark and really enjoying it so far! I gotta ask though, is there a Discord or some kind of illustrations/maps?
I am liking this novel a lot. There are small things that are not written well or are unsatisfactory according to me, but its passable. The only issue or problem with this novel is the ranking system. There are three different rankings for the three forms of power. Then there is a fourth ranking which is based on the accumulation of the three previous rankings. The problem is that this fourth ranking is not specifically mentioned about how it is formed or what combination of the 3 rankings make each of the fourth combined one. Then there is the issue of the item rankings. Higher rank beasts are used to make lower rank weapons which somehow have their own rankings.i would like to suggest making a clear chapter in the start, before the novel begins, properly indicating all the rankings and a bit about what constitutes them. A separate chapter only for the separate three rankings and what combination of them leads to the fourth combined rank.
I came here expecting nothing and recive pure gold... no platine? no dimonds yeah thet's good enough, i've love the sotry so far, the only problem is that is only 55 ch till now, i kinda wanna travel in time to read tho whole story
I love the concept of the story and the characters themselves. There are a few very minor spelling errors but significantly better than most stories on the platform. My main concern is that his stat sheet is repeated almost every single chapter, and considering that nothing changes really in the later chapters (50-75ish, which is latest released at this time), other than the number of lottery tickets, it would really help with immersion to just show the parts of the status that actually changed. There have even been chapters with the entire long status listed more than once in the chapter, leaving significantly less of the chapter to be the actual story and it feeling a bit like a cash grab tbh. Other than that, I just hope the author sticks with the story, as it does have great potential and has been a very enjoyable read.
