This story is promising. Aside from the rushed plotline at first few chapters, and some gramatical errors (as long as I can read and undertsand -boe from reading translations-it's forgiveable for now) it was to me a decent read. It's an interetsing plot considering this assasin trope has a different twist.The first few chapters need improvements, there's too many things going on. However, once you passed chapter 6, things paced better. Characters now have a slightly better depth. Storyline are not rushed anymore. Overall, this one is a keeper for now. Keep improving and keep the story going! I'd like to see how it goes in the end.
This is a really amazing novel, combo of insane technology and magic. It's a personal fav for me but I think you'll love it too. I highly recommend it for anyone who digs fantasy and mecha/space type sci-fi, check it out, you won't regret it.
This book is great. It is a most read for all great novel readers
Literally everything about this book is lit.The author has a gem mind to create such plots and characters . Love every bit of it. Just a request to the author to update chapters faster. Can't get enough of it❤️❤️❤️
this introduction already has given me great humour, great storybuilding and great plot. This has truly hit the spot that manhwas usually do.
The main draw of the story has to be the MC and the world building. MC has angst, but it is very bottled up like a smoldering ember. The prologues work and provide good backstory but do not slow down the pace. The main story has good pacing. Characters come along slowly, because of the genre of the story I believe, and it is too early to comment on character design. The world background is marvelous and well planned. It is complex and intriguing as you will expect from this genre and will keep you hooked. I found the writing quality very good and updates are regular too. Thank you, author! Please keep writing. :D
So far I'm really liking the story. The MC is very good and beautiful. Please continue and don't stop. Currently I'm in chapter 14. ? ? ?
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Great book ............................. .
Took a chance on this and its really well written, the start was a little slow for me but I love it so far and cant wait to see more from the author
Author cant keep a single thought on track, 11 chapters in and all we get is some random bs, no world building, and he cant even keep the characters names or what is around in check, also theres 2 dragons that have been introduced, so far but yet the author cant even keep track of that either.......
Author, please work on your grammar and spelling.This novel is actually pretty good, and I also love these types of novels.