What the f*ck even is this novel? What rotting novel hellhole did they fish this out of? You can find much better world building in twilight fan fiction, so I suggest you go there.
incredible journey. well worth the read, the world building is insane, and the characters themselves are all beautiful to read. the story has both melancholic and hopeful elements, so be prepared to cry. but gorgeous gorgeous story. i wish there were more like it ??
Yes!!I love it Xu Chenyao is a burst of fresh air to meBut my favourite character is her dad, he's so cute ?
5 stars for no system just keep doing you author ?
Decent Start found this by accident seems interesting but updates are a little slow since last one is 8 days ago ? so I'm oblivious wether author is gouing to drop more updates or not
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
it a good novel for those who want to try something new but also a little bit familiar, i love it and am always waiting in anticipation for a new chapter to be uploaded everyday.
*This review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism:I suggest that you get an editor, there is many errors in your grammar in chapter(s) 1(-2). I am bad at such myself or I’d help out. Also I can’t see enough of whether this is going to be a good story off the first 5 chaps, I really like to have more story by this point. Positive Feedback: Good character build up and a nice story Idea. Keep up the good notes of what you are doing.;,;.Personal Feedback: I will continue this at another time to see whether I like this book or not, as I said, the first 5 chaps aren’t enough. However, If why I am keeping this in my library turns out to be true, I will really enjoy this novel, while if not, than I doubt that I will stick around past chapter 20. Now please don’t let what people say (including myself) stop you from finishing what you started.;,;.
I like the plot of the story. So far, the grammar is pretty good.So don't drop this story...............................................................
I would like to greatly appreciate everyone for waiting patiently for the updates. I am uploading one chapter daily. Thank you for reading my craft!
Just read it with the flow , that's all I would say.story is great, character description , details on spot.chapters left to read but the work is great.??
Honestly this is boring nothing more to be said...