A masterpiece in world building, character design and power system. Just reading the fights in this story gets my blood pumping. The author has weaved a power system that is so creative and allowed for so much creativity. A power system and the main character's climb so believable that you will find yourself wondering if humanity in real life might also be able to achieve these levels of individual strength. Hats off to an incredible writer and this incredible story. I am glad that I am able to witness this story and John Falken's climb as it gets unfolded.Thank you
In a flibber-flabbering world of wobble-jibberish, zippity-zoop zongled, wibbly-wobbly whatchamacallits whimsically whiz-banged while razzle-dazzling with a higgledy-piggledy zigzagoo
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Honestly, this novel's writing is pretty bad. There are so many plot holes and stuff that just don't make sense. It's really hard to keep up with what's happening because the details don't match up, and the story just keeps repeating itself. Hopefully, the author will work on their writing skills and make a better story next time.
It a very cute book that I recommend with all my heart to read! Not only the story as a good character dynamic, but it also very relaxing to read! So that why I recommend that you read it
What happened why the author stopped writing not updated a year agoWhy good stories are droppedI hope that the author returns to publishing and writing
honestly love it right now, most of the time when a story is about a dragon their family always end up dead and even the ones that don't the MC never wants to spend time with his family and before they see them again they are dead, so I hope this story isn't dark like that, just want it to be a slightly mysterious, low-ish action, warm hearted, 4th dimensional dragon story.
Alright, a review. Sure. I will rate this honestly and say, there is for now, basically no world background. It is something that will be done in the future.Characters: for now, we have a reason behind what characters do and so, they are fleshed out. I wouldn’t Give this a perfect score but it’s not bad for now.Plot: hmm, difficult. I am not exactly sure what the plot is, but from what I read, it’s About the MC and his psychopathic tendencies That require him to kill people, which he does in nice ways for now. I especially like the torture moments.Writing quality: some grammar mistakes might appear, but I will try to make sure Noworry releases no mistakes as much as possible. In short: trust my editorial And proofreading skills.
Chapter 3 and it's already a struggle to continue reading. Main character can travel to other worlds that aren't explained at all. Main character for some reason knows common knowledge of these worlds. (Author never mentioned how he got this "common knowledge
The MC was a coward but suddenly turns courageous, when facing the boar he was like I close my eyes and you can’t see me kinda scaredy-cat but suddenly becomes very bold. Also the MC is a slave of the system that has to listen to everything it says or he will get punished by decreasing mission time limit or taking away system points that is a slavery system not sect system.
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