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Like finding novels like this ...story heading in a good direction unless author adds harem that'll derail the plot and realistic mc
um bro ireally like your doupo fanfic what happen to it, did you drop it??
The start was good, but as the story progress it became quite repetitive. The nationalism are specially strong in this one calling others country a thief but not knowing their country is also a thief.
This plot is the best and it's the most interesting book about online game I've read lately. Also, the synopsis is the first thing that persuades me a lot, need to give credit to the author for making me fall for this book. I'm getting addicted so much and wanna know what's next. However, I don't usually give 5 stars to the book I've read, but this is beyond my expectation!
Great book up until chapter 72 after that it just repeats everThing in the previous chapters not sure what happened or if it was supposed to do that
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Okay. This is my honest review. This novel is... decent. There are very, very few grammar mistakes if you don't count the other constantly forgetting to end a paragraph with a period as a grammar mistake. and the stability of the uploads is very good, though do understand my criteria isn't frequent updates, but being sure that the author will give me a chapter at a designated time every time. and for this guy, it's once a week, not bad, but definitely not good. as for the story development, it's not bad. I've read 103 chapters, and the story is pretty average. character design is also not that bad. the frequently appearing characters aren't 2d, but they're also not 3d. kind of 2.5 d, if that makes any sense. the side characters tho, are 2d, which is a problem. as for world-building, it's going pretty slow. and there isn't any sign of that changing. it's good in the way that there aren't any info-dumps. bad in the way that the world-building is unsatisfying. I can tell you what you can expect and not expect. (Might contain small, but relatively easy to guess spoilers)1- the MC becoming strong very quickly.2- the MC has a very OP bloodline and father3- the MC keeps shocking everyone because he grows monstrously fast.4- The story/novel itself is extremely idealistic. nobody is evil, nobody does any bullying, nobody is anything but friendly, which is extremely weird.and that's it, really. Oh, also harem, definitely a plus.If you have nothing to do, do give it a try. although I might seem like I'm roasting it, but it's definitely not bad, as far as my reading experience goes, there are much worse ones out there
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I really like and enjoy this book, i just hope you can fix a smaal problem, the chapters are mixed up, it doesn't follow in order, for instance ch1 and ch3 follow and ch2 and ch4 follow
Title:My NINE Female Apprentices...Synopsis:All 13 ...... Bro logical mistakes in the title/synopsis already are you serious??.......
Amazing plot settings. This is one of the best stories anyone can read. I am glad to be part of Webnovel.The author took time to narrow the settings. I must confess, this is a bomb.
Please pick this one! The plot seems really interesting, does anybody know if there is mtl available?Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxadbadhafjafjsfjsfjsfhadhqdhadhafjafjafksfkafk
