very well written book so far main character is overpowered but in a nicely tamed way that doesn't make to story drag or feel underwhelming. looking forward to seeing where this story leads
iv really liked how you start the story and how you continue to unfold it. Please continue as i am eager to learn of ruin adventures as i has been a long time since i got a book like this
The Author and Co-author (same person) are here. This is my second time writing something, i hope my improvement could be noticed. Yes i shamelessly rate it 5 stars because duhh it's my work heh.
nice story with characters and story plots
Pardon me, english isnt my main language. The story is quite good. I enjoy it so far. I noticed plenty mistakes with the grammar. Btw, Stop complaining about why the mc isnt a villain. Just enjoy the story, its free. The author doenst charge you.
Do me a favour please if you see this comment, Shoot me a reply if this novel ever gets an editor so I can actually attempt to read it thanks.
Shameless review by the author. A common practice.
Seeing the other form of LO is a grey for me, but love the storyline ??
i like it very much . Chatrpati sambhaji maharaj is my favourite . Restore the eyes and don't make a complex plot which is hard to read
initially I found the title interesting so i decided to give it a go after reading the free chapters I realized that this novel is amazing altho the main character is op it says such in the intro and if you're not into that it's perfectly fine but if you are it's a great pick only issue i found was that some lines aren't fully correct which is fine since there's not much of those mistakes which is why my overall review is a 4.8 chapters keep coming and it's great if you're reading this give it a go you'll most likely like it
Ok Translation. Story itself is as cliche as it gets. Worldbuilding is good, reminds me a bit of og Dragon Age
I MAAY be biased because I'm his editor, but honestly I have enjoyed reading this book. He's developed an interesting plot with relatable characters.