Would sell my first born to read this, great world building story telling and the plot twist with was just amasing 10/10 would force others to read at gunpoint
The cover page is nicely done, and the synopsis also. The story is interesting and your main character is expressive and has an intriguing personality and nicely written descriptions.Well done!
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The story isn't bad for what it is. There's not much character progression after the transmigration. The progression of the MC's strength has a problem. There's free attributes that the MC constantly earns. Yet we are left wondering if he uses them and how he allocates them. There's also chests but the author does not consistently tell us what is in the chest after they are opened. So you are left contemplating the MC's stats and load out. It is frustrating after a while. The author definitely isn't fleshing out the details.
If you like horror and sci-fi you're going to love this book! Intense fight scenes with great world-building that can't be beat.Awesome work!
Hey guys I just want to give this review because this is the first novel I actually read through completely without getting bored, this novel is probably going to be my favorite on this website, I can visualize every characters looks, personality, and voice/dialogue perfectly because he gives each important character different accents. The basketball system makes sense it isn’t too overpowered and he’s only gotten like 4 benefits Where I’m at which is chapter 48, the only complaint I have is that the Love interest is a clingy female but I don’t really mind it since he doesn’t focus on her a lot. The novel focuses on the middle school basketball team by making The MC (Jason) help out the team with little basketball experience he becomes a leader and helps everyone get better. It’s a pretty balanced team with Jason being a 3pt shooter/playmaker/ handle god ? (he breaks peoples ankles) and having a really tall teammate, an athlete freak (can dunk at 5 foot 8 ?), and 2 other starters which is another shooter and the actual team leader (probably for now) he doesn’t only focus on grinding basketball and only basketball, he has various side story’s like helping out people who died in the future who were meant to be NBA pros and helping his friend who’s like a sister to him, there’s also a love interest but he’s really dense I honestly don’t like the romance because the females clingy and he’s dense about her liking him but you guys might like it. He also joins a T.V program and becomes a bit of a celebrity. Story takes place 20 years in the future I think. Also it takes like a chapter or two for him to die and go back to the past.
Starts of a Lil sketchy with the topical mc bullying trope.Gets better with every episode/chapter.The mc seem a Lil bit scarred by the whole society of 2nd genders lacks confidence.Premise of the book is fantastic and has great potential.
This story is great. It is good because I search and search in Google for pokemon breeding and farming berries related novel the result is one, the only one is this novel that is not even finished and edited. I'll be sad if this novel stop.
Ps I am only on chapter 80The main character is confusing, at first i thought he was a ruthless Mc who would kill anyone in his way, however he lets some people off too easily. it confuses me as he goes through so much crap but instead of lashing out like I thought he would at the beginning he lets some of the people who insult him off easily.
I enjoy how Gu Weiwei is indeed and is using her own ability to help Mu Weiwei solve her problems. She isn't relying on anyone but herself. I enjoy these string female leads.Keep it up author.
Hi, glad to be the first one to give you a review, good work on the story development, I just want to point out some things, even if it is a work in progress give it a shot on the synopsis, be playful, creative, and then don't worry about grammar correction for now.