First, the writing quality is quite simple which is easy to follow and understand. However, it's kinda lacking in portraying the emotions of the Main character and other characters.Second, the story development is nice with lots of action. For those readers who like reading so much action stuff like playing a video game might like. But for readers who are after the story like watching cutscenes from video games, it's like the excessive fight scenes are being forced on us.Third, the Main character design is well done with a mysterious background for the MC. wish so was done for the support and some side characters too.Fourth, Updating is super slow.Fifth, the world background the author did for this the story is something I have never read before. I applaud to that.Overall, this book holds so much potential for improvement and to become a big story. Good luck.
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The characters are very one dimensional and the story overall reads like a grade school story. It would probably be suitable for young teens to read, but the story line moves so slowly that I’m not sure it could retain their attention. Most of the story reads like a summary of events: Character A did this, Character B did that. At best I can say this is a good framework for a story that needs more scene development and character depth
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It's terrible. Don't even try. Zero proof reading, incomprehensible dialogue, none of the characters have a functioning personality, and even the smut is poorly done.
A very heart warming realistic fiction. The suspense part was very curious... especially when her father calls her .I mostly liked the character names which are so realistic...preetham and shristi.
Absolutely amazing read. If you get through the massive first chapter!!! Loved your character building and your world building.Really looking forward to reading more, I would definitely stick with it, the spelling, grammar, and writing are really well done.I would just cut your chapters down to like 1500-2000 words max
This story has good potential, not so good grammar but still I can see something for it. Now granted, this story gets more views that power stones or reviews but don't stop writing, I took the time out of my day to review this.
I have a question, what control does he have to prevent the betrayal of his summoned people?............................... ....................................
Everyone this book clearly teaches us why we don't click on weird link. It's a great story, author really described the guy right. But it's kind of funny.Loved to more of the monkey adventures