I really appreciate this book. It's an all round great read.
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Really a hidden gem tbh it’s very good. The story is a tiny tiny slow. But feels just right 99% of the time
I was reading this as a favor to the author but I must say I am incredibly impressed. The use of vivid imagery combined with just right amount of action keeps my interest throughout the entire prologue. I am curious to see this Ojero and what he us all about. But still, so far I am very impressed with his story telling and world building abilities. Well done. Just one critique, what does Lazarus look like?
I love chinese mythology theme in a novel. I read spiritual attainment of minghe and loved it depite the rush ending. I’ve been looking for something similar ever since. Im glad I found this gem.
the book is great , does the author have any discord ???
Good writing so far, interesting world building and MC.
talk about talking me by surprise, I am totally in the book, I love the plots and characters. Sukani is so lazy lol?
it started about healing for the first 25 to 30 chapters. Then, it became all about fighting and seamed as if the MC used healing as a secondary.
Over all the character development is at a good pace. Also do more details on s rank and above . Alice power level should match her talent rank
Alright, I have read 5 chapters so far and it seems interesting. Naturally it helps to know that this is the author of GREED which I like very much. Also the "power system" or well the glimpse that we were allowed to see seems rather interesting. Fans being power (at least temporary power) is rather unique. At least I haven't seen that anywhere I think. If I have then it wasn't very memorable. It also brings a unique perspective on the hero/villain world building where an awakened is either a hero or a villain (in society) depending on both their ability and personality. Since fans are power and Heroes have fans this could really make for interesting situations and characters. So I'm excited. One thing that I hope you do better than in GREED is the placement of the pay wall. I think that it was just too early in GREED. Or well at least considering how you wrote the beginning it was too early. I think more people would have been interested if the free chapters started later. I don't know how much control an author has over that or if its webnovel that has a say in it. However I think that you should carefully consider where to put it here.
I would say that if you are looking for a strong protagonist then this is not the story for you. He might be annoying at first but he grows on you as time goes on and his interactions with his enemies are pretty funny later on once you get past how scared he was of them at first.