It was mid-autumn with the sun just a little before noon with a cool breeze.
*Remember, this review is based on the first 6 chapters*Constructive Criticism: It may be the style, and if that is so then this is a writing quality issue, since that is not clear, but otherwise these firat few chapters feel slightly lacking in character and plot developement... but otherwise a good start.;,;.Positive Feedback: I feel you did well in anything I did not mention above.;,;.Personal Feedback: This feels like a mix between multiple past novels I have read... if it is more like the ones I liked, I guarentee finishing this... if not then I will only guarentee continuing this until I can fully see that it is not for me.;,;.
You have slain Murlock Scout! Gained 10 experience
Oh right, she should not be hearing things from this far. She abruptly remembered that Lady Monika said she could do three things at the same time.
36 (2002/07/30)
HELLO AUTHOR HERE.GUYS IM SORRY BECAUSE OF MY EXAM I CAN'T GIVE ANY CHAPTER.PLZ FORGIVE ME. AS SOON AS MY EXAM END I WILL GIVE CHAPTERS. BUT THIS TIME THE NOVEL WILL BE MORE GOOD I HAVE ALREADY prepare something in advance. JUST WAIT A LITTLE BIT.
The writing style here is really creative and unique, while the story has a nice tempo to it-- all in the present tense. So it feels like you're right in the moment with the characters. It's really refreshing. I think the story and character development needs some work, but it's really pulling together with the more chapters that come out. Good world building too! Also, the author seems to be putting out a lot of chapters in a short span of time, so looking forward to making this one of my usuals!
Books that involve a combination of warfare and fantasy have won my favour. And this just happens to be one of the few. The readers are pulled into the action a little too fast and this does not enable us to get a proper feel of the world around the MC. But the other parts make up for this.
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ManEaterThis is one of the best series I have ever read. And I have read a lot good series, chinese, japanese, korean etc. I believe that everyone that reads this will have bad points about this story, but if you look past the one or two bad parts, this is a great series, I would definently continue reading it.
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I don't usually read Chinese cultivation novels much, but this one takes the cake. It had me at Demon. As a man with horns, I can't resist a novel with "demon" in it.